Autumn Dance

I watch the red leaf
outside my window
being swept away by the wind
and as the wind subsides
it falls then it's on the move again
in the air dancing at random
mixing with the yellow and brown
then it swirls and rises up 
and falls again
with the other leaves on the floor
and after awhile
it does an encore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sergi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Hi Cindi: Thank you for your kind comment to an old poem.
Rockwell Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Beautiful!
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July 22, 2015 at 6:52 AM
Thank you. Laura for your comment.
Leiser Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 3:45 PM
What a beautiful and creative observation of the falling leave, Ralph. I really like your descriptions, and thought this was very well written. A 7 from me :)
Deschler Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 9:58 PM
This poem captures all of the color and magic of my favorite season... Beautifully penned, Ralph! I am adding it to my favs!
Sergi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Kelly: It's an old favorite of mine.
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 3:23 PM
this is very very cute. Fall is coming all too soon!
Sergi Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 11:06 AM
Hi Connie: Long time no speak . Mahalo for the comment.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 9:36 AM
I was enchanted Ralph. I adore autumn and I long for it every summer.
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