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Autumn Dance

I walked through falling confetti of colorful autumn leaves I twirled and danced in the crisp air and warm sunshine The gray clouds that hugged the distant mountain let go The sky became clear blue all around, for miles I could see The ground filled with the recent cold rain, quickly dried As the breeze shook the other leaves still hanging on tightly To the many branches that shined deep into the woods Along the road the brook gurgled, chipmunk scampered, In a world where I danced on my own Heidi Sands 10/22/21

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Date: 10/28/2021 10:46:00 AM
I see you so clearly dancing away in the warm sunshine. Love it, Heidi. A favorite for me.
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Date: 10/28/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Sandy. I appreciate the visit and the fave. I hope all is well :)
Date: 10/26/2021 10:27:00 PM
Hello Heidi ... nice Heidi. Everything is preparing for the coming winter and the world will turn to white - thanks Heidi - Lindsay
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Date: 10/27/2021 10:10:00 AM
Hi Lindsay yes, you are right. And the new fallen snow will be a pretty winter wonderland too. Thank you very much and you are welcome. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 10/25/2021 5:50:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful Heidi and a fave for me. Wonderful imagery. I could see you twirling about in the falling leaves. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/26/2021 6:34:00 AM
Hi Judy. Thank you very much. I appreciate your visit and the fave. God Bless you too. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 10/24/2021 7:02:00 PM
Dear Heidi, your poem is filled with appreciation, joy and beauty.. both the natural beauty surrounding you, but also the inner beauty of the dance that came from within. May you always dance on your own. So splendid and inspiring! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/25/2021 5:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan. I appreciate your kind feedback. It brightens this gray, rainy day today. I hope all is well :)
Date: 10/24/2021 4:34:00 PM
I love your 'autumn dance" Heidi, Nicely penned
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Date: 10/25/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I am happy you loved it. I hope you have a great day :)
Date: 10/24/2021 8:28:00 AM
wonderful autumnal imagery heidi:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2021 4:23:00 PM
Hi Jan. Thank you very much. I hope all is well. Hugs :)
Date: 10/23/2021 11:36:00 AM
A beautiful Autumnal hymn you have crafted Heidi! I enjoyed reading it today, Happy Saturday!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Mike. I am happy you enjoyed this. Happy Saturday :)
Date: 10/23/2021 12:58:00 AM
Hello Heidi, Thank you for letting us join in this dance. I think I'm in love with Autumn's strewn leaves. -Richard
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Date: 10/23/2021 7:03:00 AM
Hi Richard. You are welcome. The leaves are pretty lately and plenty of them. Thank you, my friend :)
Date: 10/22/2021 3:10:00 PM
Next, you have to write us the Winter Dance!
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Date: 10/23/2021 7:02:00 AM
I will think about that Robert. Thank you. I love when the snow falls. Very pretty here :)
Date: 10/22/2021 12:08:00 PM
Summer is just a memory now as we move into autumn, but I welcome it as its my favourite season. Hope you have a lovely weekend Heidi. Tom
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Date: 10/22/2021 12:50:00 PM
Hi Tom. Yes , now is the beauty of autumn. I hope you have a nice weekend. Thank you very much :)
Date: 10/22/2021 11:39:00 AM
It sure feels like joy when autumn displays its splendor, Heidi. Enjoyed the waltzing verse dancing to the rhythms of nature you hear.
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Date: 10/22/2021 12:49:00 PM
Hi Vijay. It is joyful. I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you :)

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