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Autumn Crisp

crisp - the air - red and green apples - the bite
russet and tangy twilight
moonlit cores with black seeds

9/5/2021
Bite Size Poem no.20
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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September 9, 2021 at 11:56 AM

Enjoyed reading your well thought out work. It reads like a winner to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

September 7, 2021 at 3:50 AM

This is more than bite sized Kim. A marvelous contender for this contest and thousands of others.

September 7, 2021 at 4:23 AM

Thank you so much! ~ hugs

Joseph P. DiMino

September 6, 2021 at 2:18 PM

You got my attention. Delicious! Your poem pie of the day in my opinion.

September 6, 2021 at 5:09 PM

Thank you so much, Joe!

September 6, 2021 at 11:41 AM

Lovely poem.

September 6, 2021 at 12:01 PM

Thank you!

September 6, 2021 at 6:39 AM

Oh I love this great poem. I love apples too. I like to make apple crisp in the fall :)

September 6, 2021 at 7:50 AM

I love apple-cranberry crisp. It is a recipe from pampered chef :) Thank you, Heidi!

September 6, 2021 at 5:52 AM

Each line an image --of sight, color and taste. Well done, Kim.

September 6, 2021 at 9:28 AM

Thanks so much!

September 6, 2021 at 7:50 AM

Thanks so much!

Victor Buhagiar

September 6, 2021 at 1:04 AM

If you make an apple pie, send me a piece. Hugs

September 6, 2021 at 5:17 AM

Aww…my mom’s favorite!

September 6, 2021 at 12:10 AM

Thank you Kim for your kind Blog comments..good title for a bite size poesy

September 6, 2021 at 5:17 AM

Thank you:)

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