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Autumn Crisp

crisp - the air - red and green apples - the bite russet and tangy twilight moonlit cores with black seeds 9/5/2021 Bite Size Poem no.20 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2021 11:56:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your well thought out work. It reads like a winner to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/7/2021 3:50:00 AM

This is more than bite sized Kim. A marvelous contender for this contest and thousands of others.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2021 4:23:00 AM

Thank you so much! ~ hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/6/2021 2:18:00 PM

You got my attention. Delicious! Your poem pie of the day in my opinion.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 5:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Joe!

Shonima Burman

Date: 9/6/2021 11:41:00 AM

Lovely poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 12:01:00 PM

Thank you!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/6/2021 6:39:00 AM

Oh I love this great poem. I love apples too. I like to make apple crisp in the fall :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 7:50:00 AM

I love apple-cranberry crisp. It is a recipe from pampered chef :) Thank you, Heidi!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/6/2021 5:52:00 AM

Each line an image --of sight, color and taste. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 9:28:00 AM

Thanks so much!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 7:50:00 AM

Thanks so much!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/6/2021 1:04:00 AM

If you make an apple pie, send me a piece. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 5:17:00 AM

Aww…my mom’s favorite!

Brian Strand

Date: 9/6/2021 12:10:00 AM

Thank you Kim for your kind Blog comments..good title for a bite size poesy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 5:17:00 AM

Thank you:)