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Autumn Colors

Hillsides aflame with orange, yellow, and red
Nature paints an exquisite landscape
During autumn, I resoundingly dread
Neighbors going to see colors, they said,
Getting away for their autumn escape. 

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November 18, 2022

autumncolorquintain (english)

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Linda Alice Fowler

November 20, 2022 at 12:34 PM

LOL. A neighbor at the last place I lived used to come ask me to rake the leaves in her yard because she was positive they were coming from my trees. I guess none fell from hers or other neighbors. Nice imagery Milt:) laf

L Milton Hankins

November 20, 2022 at 1:20 PM

I would have told her if they land in your yard, they're yours!

Duke Beaufort

November 20, 2022 at 7:34 AM

I'm not certain about what the neighbors are saying. Why do they need to travel if there are already beautiful colors in the area? That seems wasteful. Is that what you dread---or is it the commotion? You're making me think! So, a music artist you are! That is a wonderful thing to be. I love melodies that stick around--the classics. Very enjoyable to read your work here.

L Milton Hankins

November 20, 2022 at 8:41 AM

Thanks so much, Duke, for your thoughts and your comment.

Tom Cunningham

November 20, 2022 at 5:43 AM

Nothing beats those beautiful autumn colours Milton, natures stunning tapestry. Tom

L Milton Hankins

November 20, 2022 at 8:42 AM

I love the colors, Tom, but I don't care for the chill in the air portending winter.

Joanna Daniel

November 20, 2022 at 4:06 AM

Congratulations, Milt, well written:)

L Milton Hankins

November 20, 2022 at 8:42 AM

Thank you so much, Jo.

Sally Eslinger

November 19, 2022 at 8:43 PM

Ha, ha! Well, neighbors probably hiding in their basement rec room, in sleeping bags on their pool tables, waiting til all their leaves blown on your lawn to get an escape from their raking? Oh, goodness! How mean of me! Hahahaha here, we’re old and ill, neighbors help with ours thankfully. Hope you are fine! Hugs,sally

L Milton Hankins

November 20, 2022 at 8:43 AM

Thanks, Sally. Well, I have to pay to have mine taken care of.

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