Autumn Collection

autumn tiptoes in
                    a veil of stunning colours ~
                    coy blushing bride beams

                         tiny birds chirping
                   squirrels spurting from nowhere ~
                    clouds floating sailboats

                       sky displays palette
                    of paints gathered from rainbow ~
                      leaves wither and fall

   
A Haiku Collection Of Three Nature-themed Poems - Poetry Contest
                        Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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                             SECOND PLACE

                            September 23, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:01 AM
~ Congratulations on your winning poem ~
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 4:34 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Appreciate your comment.
Roper Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Malabika. Great canvas work.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 4:35 PM
Thank you, Eve. Appreciate your visit and comment.
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 4:01 AM
I enjoyed reading this descriptive winning Haiku series. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
George Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 9:28 AM
Very lovely scenes beautifully described. Of all, I love the image of clouds floating sail boats . Congratulations on your win dear Mala . With some guests at home, I am a bit busy. So can't read as many poems as I wish
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 10:01 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Your comments are just precious! No worries, life becomes busy - we are fortunate to have similar-minded friends to share our thoughts. Love ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:39 AM
A Great writing. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. Your visit is a real delight! BW~ Mala
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Back to see winners. and your wonderful set, Mala. BIG cograts
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Yours is just superb! Love ~ Mala
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:29 AM
Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful poems!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Thank you so much, Tania. I am truly honoured.
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 8:44 PM
you did a great job with these. I especially liked the middle one.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Glad you liked.
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 1:49 PM
- Beautifully described, Mala :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 4:40 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Appreciate your encouraging words. Hugs ~ Mala
Slaughter Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 11:41 AM
These are lovely, Mala. BOL in the contest.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 4:37 PM
Thank you, Jim. Appreciate your encouraging comment. BW~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Hello Mala, well done. Autumn reall y came quickly. I find it sad that summer is over. Love & Friendship , Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 11:21 AM
Hello Mala, Mala I already miss summer. How i wish that summer were the longer season. Love & Friendship Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 11:16 AM
Thanks, Darlene. Your encouraging words inspire me. Yes, Dear Friend, Autumn came too quickly.
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