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Autumn Bride

Dressed
in hues
of russet,
crimson and gold,
the Indian bride
captivates everyone.
Her starched saree rustles
as I walk over
it with barefoot.
Cool breeze, bright
sun bless
her.
~~~
16.09.2021
For :
Malabika Ray Choudhury
MERSE - Beauty Of Fall

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Date: 9/26/2021 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful imagery , Rama , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/26/2021 6:46:00 AM
A lovely take on this contest! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/26/2021 6:08:00 AM
congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed.
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Date: 9/25/2021 10:35:00 AM
Beautiful Indian bride! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/24/2021 11:05:00 PM
A great write on the Indian bride.
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:44:00 AM
Unique imagery of the Indian bride that makes this poem truly captivating, Rama:)
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Date: 9/18/2021 1:18:00 AM
Nice images Rama,Have a creative weekend
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Date: 9/17/2021 7:30:00 AM
Wonderful imagery..
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Date: 9/17/2021 5:13:00 AM
Beautiful!!! Stunning imagery throughout...
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Date: 9/16/2021 10:31:00 AM
That brought back memories of a wedding I attended years ago, I was honoured to be invited to my old bosses daughters wedding, it was a Hindu celebration, so colourful to see. Tom
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