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Autumn Breeze

silent breeze, with swift precison strips without notice. taking all that it touches with it. but it is too greedy, and takes more than it can carry leaving a trail of briliant reds and yellows -the evidence of a grand theft. with no one to challenge the autumn breeze, it continues over yonder in search of the fabled fall and its gilded trees

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/6/2014 3:53:00 AM
That's a truly great poem, creative and full of originaliry. I cannot forget and takes more than it can carry leaving a trail of briliant reds and yellows -the evidence of a grand theft.
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Date: 10/4/2012 12:44:00 AM
lovely autumn breeze you have shared here..enjoy it Nicholas...thank you nice work <3<3<3 SK
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Nicholas Bello
Date: 10/4/2012 8:14:00 PM
Thank you SK :) its my favorite season along with winter. hope you enjoyed it

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