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Autumn Bliss

Red leaves carpet the ground with beautiful softness, as a soft breeze swirls rose petals around a Japanese maiden, as she plays a flute softly and divinely. Under a pagoda she plays enchanting tunes, which comfort animals in the woods, as they prepare for coming winter. Nearby there's a crystalline pond, reflecting the splendor of autumn back to the eyes of travelers who doubt they are experiencing Nirvana in a fraction....

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Date: 2/17/2017 9:26:00 AM
Well done! Congrats!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2017 2:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Sushma, for your kind applause!!! ;-)
Date: 2/17/2017 8:26:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Teddy. Congrats on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2017 2:26:00 AM
Greetings, Agnes. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my verse!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/14/2017 7:00:00 PM
Love it Teddy. Such beautiful images and the shape like a layered landscape that you would see in the Orient. It is all very well written.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2017 2:23:00 AM
Oriental landscapes are one of the most beautiful natural scenes I've ever seen..... Thank you so much Janis, for reading and enjoying my piece!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/14/2017 11:32:00 AM
your imagery is so so beautiful Teddy and autumn is my favourite season too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2017 2:17:00 AM
I'm really glad I now know your favorite season!!! ;-) Thank you so much Jan, for reading and enjoying my verse!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/14/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you for sharing. This is a lovely verse.hugs x.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2017 2:16:00 AM
Welcome, Patricia. Thank you for enjoying my verse!!! *^_^*

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