Autumn Birds In Sky Thunder

The sky ironed out n da' morning divine
On a November day cold
Celestial rainbows born of peeping sunshine
Cloud dreams rush past unrolled

Under the bare leafless trees
Masqueraded hard to see  
A bird lands on a branch'y trapeze
Whilst' a gusting humming bird laughs elusively 

Yet in that moment prevue
A sparkle of butterflies at glance
Capturing shades of yellow and warm blue 
As treetops sway to the wind of dance

A secret life in the windy air 
Sultry skies in hues of grey and white 
At the moment birds n' butterflies scare
The whole time sky cracking in sight

Pleading in chilly branches above
Whilst autumn boom rumble laughs merrily 
Birds n' butterflies lying determinedly in love 
O' plunder n' thunder strike with golden symphony 

Autumn now sways in aquamarine streaks  
Spreading opulently past the stars
As the night revolves the sound of birdland shrieks 
End of rainbow, yonder far

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/29/2016 3:27:00 PM
I am a fan of seasonal poems and especially if they have critters in them, I am am both a feeder and a watcher of birds. Therefore, I am loving your poem. Handing you a 7!
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Daniel Miltz
Date: 3/10/2017 2:53:00 PM
...thank you for your wonderful comment! .....daniel miltz
Date: 11/29/2016 3:26:00 PM
I am a fan of seasonal poems and especially if they have critters in them, I am am both a feeder and a watcher of birds. Therefore, I am loving your poem. Handing you a 7!
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Date: 3/23/2017 7:58:00 PM
nice response...th' you
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