Autumn Begins Early

A wind blew the leaves
The boughs of the trees 
Were swaying the leaves
Were dancing to and froe
One leaf was falling

Slowly to the ground 
The color of the leaf
Was a bright red shade
the autumn season
is early this year
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Magdalinos Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 2:08 AM
Hello Drlene How are you? This is a lovely poem about nature.Blessings❤️
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 10:12 AM
Hello Mulu, Thank you for your nice comment. I have been busy going to therapy for my knee. I have arthritis and now i have tingling going on. So i do excises twice a day. I am now on a cane when walking. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/ 😊
Haywood Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 6:36 PM
Hi Darlene, the sense of quiet reverence in this poem is deeply moving. The phrasing 'The evergreen life that survives the underworld because God has remembered it' holds so much weight and resonance. A profound reflection on grace and endurance. Well Done! - Chris
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 10:15 AM
Hello Christopher Haywood, Hi! Thank you for this wonderful comment. It is amazing that the evergreen trees can survives a harsh winter. They are strong trees. Your friend, /Darlene/😊
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 4:01 AM
A fine lovely brisk crisp autumn poem. Kudos!! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 11:00 AM
Hello S. Zaynab Kamoonpuri, Oh, thank you S. Zaynab, I hope all is well with you. blessings my friend. /Darlene.😊
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 8:03 PM
Ha, ha. Perhaps where you are... Here in Chicago, we just survived eight days of hellish heat and humidity. Two days off right now. Then back at it. PLEASE get here, Autumn. PLEASE! Can you send it our way, Darlene??!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 10:19 AM
Hello Gershon Wolf, I will try to do my best to get Autumn to go in your area. LOL. We had high heat this summer it was not normal heat that we are use to. We had the end of a tornado as well. Your friend, /Darlene/
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September 6, 2026 at 7:06 PM
I love when Autumn comes early. My favorite season. You might be clairvoyant, I think it will come early this year too. If you ever get to Wisconsin, Door County is the place to be in Autumn. Awesome poem Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 10:14 AM
Hello Michael Ramel, It is so nice to meet you Michael. I live in Canada. I saw a red leaf fall to the ground in th3e middle of August. The leave are beginning to change color. here early. Once they fall to the ground the raking begins. The door county must be crowded this time of year with visitors in Wisconsin. Your friend, /Darlene/.
Sands Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 10:33 AM
I love this. I can see it! A fave :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 10:01 AM
Hello Heidi, Thank you for the fav. The leaves are changing clors early this year. Hugs. /Darlene😢
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 11:33 AM
Hello Heidi, Thank you for the fave. I was surprised to see this red leaf. Hugs. /Darlene/😀
One Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 9:38 AM
It is still summer over here.. but you describe the changes beautifully.. Have a lovely day..
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 11:37 AM
Hello Silent One, Hello Silent One. I hope all is well with you. We have summer weather here today. Yet some leaves have fallen. It is the long weekend here. A labour Day weekend. Enjoy your weekend. my friend. /Darlene./
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September 3, 2026 at 4:38 PM
Aren't you glad that there is a gleam of hope that it will appear early with some cooler air, Darlene. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Way to go. 👍⭐. Sara K.
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September 4, 2026 at 10:21 AM
Hello Sara, I look forward to the cooler air. Raking leaves i do not look forward to. Summer is my fav. season. Hugs. Darlene😊
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 12:42 PM
- Autumn started early here too, Darlene :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 10:23 AM
Hello Anne l Lise Andresen., Thjis year it has begun early. Hugs. /darlene/
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