Autumn Begins

Long days transform into longer nights
As crimson leaves fall to the ground
Green grass starts to turn dull brown
Carved pumpkins decorate
Bright chrysanthemums 
Pumpkin spice scents
Waft in the
Crisp air
Fall

8/22/19

Contest: Autumn or September or October Nonet Contest

Sponsor: Caren Krustsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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La France Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Tania, congratulations on your Podium Place in Brian's Blog Series with this lovely poem !
Kitchin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:59 PM
Thank you! :)
Watson Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 9:27 AM
You've set the scene very well, Tania. You didn't mean 'waft' though, did you?
Kitchin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:59 PM
Yes, thank you Wendy :)
Toney Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Well done, Tania! ~Mark
Kitchin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Thank you Mark!
Delaney Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Love the form for this subject, It is like a descent into the season. SuZ
Kitchin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Thank you Suzanne!
Makama Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 10:20 AM
This is a masterpiece. Your soul is palpable here, a great dish of lines my wonderful friend.
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Thank you!
Green Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 7:35 AM
Beautifully done Tania. Nothing like a beautiful Autumn poem on a very hot August day. Thank you for the break from the heat. Best wishes in the contest
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Thank you Chris!
Michael Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 4:48 AM
Autumn leaves are falling...changes sings the wind...Nice one
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 4:50 AM
Thank you Arturo!
Gauthier Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 9:42 PM
Lovely, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 4:43 AM
Thank you Line! :)
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