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Autumn Begins

Long days transform into longer nights As crimson leaves fall to the ground Green grass starts to turn dull brown Carved pumpkins decorate Bright chrysanthemums Pumpkin spice scents Waft in the Crisp air Fall 8/22/19 Contest: Autumn or September or October Nonet Contest Sponsor: Caren Krustsinger

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Constance La France

Date: 10/23/2019 9:49:00 AM

Tania, congratulations on your Podium Place in Brian's Blog Series with this lovely poem !

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/23/2019 2:59:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Wendy Watson

Date: 10/23/2019 9:27:00 AM

You've set the scene very well, Tania. You didn't mean 'waft' though, did you?

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/23/2019 2:59:00 PM

Yes, thank you Wendy :)

Mark Toney

Date: 10/23/2019 8:41:00 AM

Well done, Tania! ~Mark

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/23/2019 6:28:00 PM

Thank you Mark!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/23/2019 8:23:00 AM

Love the form for this subject, It is like a descent into the season. SuZ

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/23/2019 6:28:00 PM

Thank you Suzanne!

Funom Makama

Date: 9/9/2019 10:20:00 AM

This is a masterpiece. Your soul is palpable here, a great dish of lines my wonderful friend.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/9/2019 11:37:00 AM

Thank you!

Chris Green

Date: 8/23/2019 7:35:00 AM

Beautifully done Tania. Nothing like a beautiful Autumn poem on a very hot August day. Thank you for the break from the heat. Best wishes in the contest

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/23/2019 5:58:00 PM

Thank you Chris!

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/23/2019 4:48:00 AM

Autumn leaves are falling...changes sings the wind...Nice one

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/23/2019 4:50:00 AM

Thank you Arturo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 9:42:00 PM

Lovely, Tania.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/23/2019 4:43:00 AM

Thank you Line! :)