Autumn and Its Falling Leaves Part Ii

Autumn and its falling leaves     PART II


Some trees leaves were more lucky and blessed
To feel the touch of snow in winters on hills 
And enchanting fragrances of flowers on plains    
Without complaining and regretting any thing 
They whispered, about their lovely days and nights
They were happy about their stay on trees 
Their love for rains and longing for breeze
Their yearning for dance, music and Sun’s feel 
In Autumn, when trees are shedding leaves 
I love to watch the falling of leaves

Some other leaves murmured to me a different fate 
When I was moving amid a scattered tree shade 
In a semi desert forest away from my home
The leaves here were of different colors and shapes
They had little fate to attract the clouds and shower
Still during the time of their short fly in the air 
They too were smiling while departing from the air 
In Autumn, when trees are shedding leaves 
I love to watch the falling of leaves

The leaves were murmuring their story in my ear 
Their journey to this world and their returning
While singing they told how they lived a life full of love
Caring for others without thinking for themselves
Loving their friends and loving the God
Was the secret of happy life, they wanted to convey   
“If you want to be always happy, just follow my way”
They lived a life full of life and were parting without a sigh
Even while parting from the company of their fellow locks
Who were still singing and dancing on trees in the sky

What a peace I saw on these parting leaves
Although they knew, there was no one to sing
A song in their memory and no one to weep
In Autumn, when trees are shedding leaves 
I love to watch the falling of leaves

But Alas! This autumn 
While moving amid my favorite trees
I found some not very strange leaves 
In a stage of agony and freeze, before saying adieu
They were falling with pain and were crying
And were murmuring the cruelty done by humans
With Nature and with its enchanting children’s*  
And by madly cutting mans best friend trees

I still walk in my favorite season of autumn
And try to hear the murmur of autumn leaves
To keep the humans apprise about the agonies of 
Trees and their darling flowers and leaves.


Ravindra
Kanpur 24th Nov. 2009


* Air, Water and Earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/16/2011 2:36:00 PM
Profound insight in this superb write about autumn. I was so pleased to see it featured. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 4/11/2011 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Ravindra. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Ravindra
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:34:00 AM
Congrats Ravindra on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope u had an enjoyable poetic weekend luv..
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Date: 2/16/2010 12:32:00 PM
So Nice to read a poem by a lover of nature. I live in a very old part of town. The trees are so tall and broad on either side they touch each other over the street. I love this feeling. I feel the trees are alive, which they are, and should be treated with utmost respect. I very often say a silent hello to the trees. Am I crazy? Yes! Crazy about trees. love, daver
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Date: 12/10/2009 4:45:00 AM
Again, a beautiful poem. I always cry when I see people cutting trees. I really wish that they'd leave them alone to grow. ~Juliane
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Date: 11/28/2009 9:06:00 AM
very beautiful poem, keep sharing
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Date: 11/27/2009 6:43:00 PM
U have given your leaves life in the beautiful story poem and references to loving God... so very beautiful.. will there be a Part 3?.. happy u enjoyed my poem about opportunities... blessing ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/27/2009 3:48:00 AM
Very captivating write. Nicely done. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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