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Autumn Afterglow

What a cruel let down
A heartbreaking shakedown
When summer bliss
Exits with a sunny kiss
How short-lived the days
That conjure our praise
October gales abruptly call
Announcing the arrival of Fall
Bundling for chilly nights
We set our sights on new heights
It’s the price we have to pay
For admission to the colorful display
Across the land the winds blow
A sullen goodbye swaying in afterglow



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on March 3, 2019 for contest WEEK 1 MARCH 2019 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

and October 26, 2018 for contest SEASONAL OR UNSEASONAL sponsored by KIM RODRIGUES

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Date: 3/5/2019 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Line :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 10/27/2018 12:59:00 AM
"Exits with a sunny kiss" Love it!, I mean, I really love it. Good job!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/8/2019 6:17:00 PM
WON as it should have great!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2018 1:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/26/2018 10:18:00 PM
oh, nicely done... great imagery ... good luck in the cotest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/26/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thanks you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.

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