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Autumn Afterglow

Autumn Afterglow Pristine blue October skies are flowing Falling leaves a’ waltz upon the air Tapestries of woven destinations Painted in a colorful affair Apple pies in open windows calling Woolen jackets hung beside the door Frolicking through wayward pumpkin patches Hand in hand, now who could ask for more Pinecones rest along a winding pathway Sparrows sing in barren trees above Dreaming in the afterglow of Autumn Nature’s beauty shared with one you love
10/23/18 Written for the Seasonal or Unseasonal Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 11/10/2018 4:17:00 PM
Lovely poem, Chris. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/13/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 11/10/2018 3:53:00 PM
I love this!!! Your imagery took me to a simpler time, and I could smell that pie for sure!!! A well-deserved win! Congrats! ~Cindi
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Chris Green
Date: 11/13/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so very much Cindi for your kindness
Date: 11/10/2018 3:48:00 PM
A glowing, cozy write! ...apple pies and woolen jackets! Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my contest, Chris! <3 Kim
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Chris Green
Date: 11/13/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Kim, I am honored to have placed so high in your contest
Date: 11/10/2018 3:46:00 PM
I am so happy to see this lovely poem high on the winner's list Chris. As you know I loved it and faved it! Congratulations! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 11/13/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie for all of your kindness
Date: 10/26/2018 9:29:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one, Autumn is my favourite season of all. A lovers waltz - very nice.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2018 12:00:00 PM
I am happy you enjoyed this one. I enjoy Autumn as well, though where I live now Autumn is very short lived.
Date: 10/23/2018 7:57:00 PM
Excellently done. Best of luck, bro
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 10/23/2018 5:02:00 PM
The sights, smells, and sounds in this one are so precious. You should either bake them in a pie and sell them---or get your poems published. They are just wonderful!!! We are all vying for second place in the contest. A real winner and a FAVE for me. Bravo, poet! Best wishes, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 5:23:00 PM
That sounds like a good idea...poetic pie, mmmm. : ) I guess it would be a little slice of life. : ) Thanks so much my friend for all of your kindness.
Date: 10/23/2018 4:29:00 PM
I can picture each scene that your words express so well, Chris! Good luck in the contest :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Laura. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 10/23/2018 4:15:00 PM
aww such a charming romantic autumnal scene Chris. good luck in the contest - I predict a winner with this lovely piece:-) hugs jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Jan so much for everything.
Date: 10/23/2018 3:56:00 PM
Excellent, Vijay--describes very appealing scenes! Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/23/2018 4:55:00 PM
OOPS! Great poem, CHRIS!!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thanks so very much Janice. Psst, this is Chris. : )
Date: 10/23/2018 3:46:00 PM
I love this charming romantic celebration of the season Chris! It exudes warmth amidst the cold. Lovely, and I am putting it into my Faves! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so very much Connie. I am smiling now because of you. : )
Date: 10/23/2018 3:43:00 PM
This poem describes it just as it is, very nice! I like the apple pie line - I made an apple pie the other day, but the crust didn't come out so well. I was missing ingredients. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/23/2018 3:44:00 PM
I'm sorry to hear that Heidi but happy you liked my poem. : ) I'm sure the pie was delicious anyway.

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