Autumn Afterglow

On a far off, lonely hillside
a living spectacle awaits
where aspens spin their golden crowns
and sleepy maple trees awake. 

A place where winding paths are lined
with multicolored canopies 
where gurgling streams are tickling
frogs and fish and buzzing bees. 

A swath of pumpkins in a patch
in varied shapes askew appears
a hanging scarecrow’s crooked smile 
fails to raise the raven’s fears. 

As autumn’s sun fades wistfully
a crisp cool breeze sways branch and leaf
a lone horned owl is hooting low
reminders that fall’s days are brief. 

As sun’s soft rays in beams surround
kissing fields in copper tones
stillness comes as dark descends
and hugs warm Autumn’s afterglow. 






Written on 10/22/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 3:24 PM
so lovely to read this gem again Laura I can see why its a favourite, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, Jan! :)
Devonshire Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Laurie, I admire the way you personify the trees, streams and other sites found in nature in this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win! There were many terrific entries, including yours. Thank you for participating in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Leiser Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 11:23 AM
I’m so happy you liked my poem, Carolyn! Thanks for placing me in your contest! :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:35 PM
Love it, Laura. Beautiful. Congrats on your win.
Leiser Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Thank you, Line! I’m so happy you liked my poem! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:00 PM
I am so happy to see this fave of mine on the winner's list Laura! I think you outdid yourself with this awe inspiring beauty. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
Leiser Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 11:24 AM
You are so supportive, Connie! Thank you! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Everything so alive in your Autumn afterglow! “Kissing fields in copper tones - so pretty, Laura! Congrats on your placement! <3 Kim
Leiser Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Thanks, Kim! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Your spectacular vision of autumn spoke to the deepest inspiration I have of this, my favorite season, Laura. It would be difficult to find a more glorious poem about autumn! I hope this beauty wins the top position on the winner's list Laura. This is a crown jewel that shines brighter than all the others! A fave! : ) xxoo
Leiser Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 5:54 PM
Wow, thanks so very much for the high compliments, Connie! It really makes my day! :)
Ashley Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:36 PM
You've captured the heart and spirit of the Autumn season with spectacular imagery that enlivens your glowing verses. A great title as well! Such an enjoyable poem of seasonal delight, Laura. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Leiser Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Thanks so much for your kind and encouraging words, Susan! I’m so thrilled you liked this poem. :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Love this write Laura, afterglow one of my fave words...
Leiser Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thank you so much for commenting, John! Glad you enjoyed this one. :)
Warrior Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Lovely work my friend...ready for a win, Laura...love, light & unity...^WW^
Leiser Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Thank you, WW! I appreciate you compliments :)
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 6:17 PM
I have a warm glow reading your awesome autumnal poem Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 7:12 PM
Thanks for commenting, Jan! So glad you liked this. :)
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