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autumn 1st attempt at Haiku

what my eyes behold autumn trees giving color winter right behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/17/2011 10:00:00 PM
loved it ...
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Date: 2/1/2011 7:57:00 AM
I love the attempt nature gives here.. Oo. unless u mean your first attempt at haiku.. well either way I can see it from both sides... the side winter making an attempt.. for autumn.. enjoyed
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Date: 1/30/2011 11:57:00 PM
Oh boy, this is good. Harry
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Date: 1/30/2011 10:03:00 PM
Very good for first time. Keep it up!
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Date: 1/30/2011 1:53:00 PM
Nice transition of the seasons you have captured well, Robert
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