autumn

Autumn Haiku - Set of Three ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ autumn whirlwinds of splendor autumn breathes umber blizzards ~ crimson cloudbursts whorl gusts of gold tangos jitterbug on orange swirls ~ gales of scarlet squalls outbursts of amber ride on russet fandangos ~ vermillion downpours

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:37:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/23/2024 10:48:00 AM

Hi Sara! Thank you so much for your lovely note of congratulations. I really enjoy writing haiku especially around an autumn theme! So inspiring! Sending you my gratitude and blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 11:02:00 PM

Love love yours. Congrats, Sam

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/23/2024 10:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea! Fall just seems to dance for me! Can't help but think of the golden wonder of your mountains right now - aspens fluttering in the wind like flecks of gold! Take care. Sending you blessings of autumn joy!

Regina Elliott

Date: 10/9/2024 8:32:00 AM

A big Congratulations, Sam, on this wondrous winning autumnal haiku. Great work! Blessings

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/23/2024 10:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, Regina! Writing it was as fun as watching autumn leaves dance in the wind! Hope all is well with you. Sending you bountiful fall blessings!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:14:00 PM

Sam, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku set.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/23/2024 10:42:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania! Had fun looking at the fun, blustery side of fall. Again, another fun contest from you! I do enjoy writing haiku. So grateful for all of the work you do for PS! Blessings to you!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/28/2024 10:12:00 AM

Very creative Sam I enjoyed this. So beautiful. Blessings :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/23/2024 10:40:00 AM

Hi Heidi! So much fun to dance with autumn! So happy this brought you joy! Continued prayers! Blessings! :)"

Paige Hind

Date: 9/27/2024 4:05:00 PM

Hey, this is enchanting....what a great job, Sam! :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/23/2024 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paige! Fall just seems to lend itself to a harvest of creativity! Sending you blessings of autumn joy!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2024 1:49:00 AM

These 3-liners offer beautiful imagery and a striking sprinkling of alliteration, Sam. I can imagine all of them painted on canvas. Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2024 10:36:00 AM

Hi Paul, thank you so much for your delightful feedback. I so appreciate the thoughtfulness of your comments! Love your idea of seeing all the colors on a canvas. Indeed autumn is a master artist. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings of autumn splendor!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/24/2024 8:55:00 PM

Beautiful string of colourful haiku Sam, over fork over. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/24/2024 9:28:00 PM

Greetings, Tom! Thank you so much not only for your encouraging feedback but also for your best wishes. Means so much. Sending blessings of autumn joy to you. Over Fork Over! Hope you have a beautiful autumn.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/24/2024 9:22:00 PM

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/23/2024 10:43:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, enjoyed!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/24/2024 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Arthur. For me Autumn is a storm of colors that I never tire of seeing. Sending you all the blessings of the autumn harvest!

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/23/2024 5:16:00 AM

magnifique, great poetry in images and sonorities, waw yanhn

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/23/2024 10:55:00 AM

Merci beaucoup, Yann. I so love your feedback! Benedictions a toi!

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/22/2024 9:07:00 PM

Such sumptuous creativity, Sam! Great haiku collection! :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/23/2024 10:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Laura! Autumn, for me, is truly a time of colorful splendor even in the storms! Sending you autumn blessings of joy!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/22/2024 9:04:00 AM

Dear samszy! Wow this is so unique how youv written your string of haiku talented soul! You have an individual voice and thats something i admire in this world of copying etc! “ gusts of gold tangos jitterbug on orange swirls ~ gales of scarlet squalls” wow those orange swirls and hales of scarlet squalls! The way you use poetic techniques in few syllables is truly impressive! Seamless alliterations! And i love “ outbursts of amber” so clever and creative! Well delivered! Sending you light always

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/23/2024 12:26:00 PM

Dearest Inky, I am so delighted by your amazing feedback and lovely compliments! Many, many thanks!!! This was such a fun haiku string to write - thinking about the "storm" of colors in the fall and the splendor they bring to every day. I think, and feel strongly, that each of us has been given a unique view of the world to express - to develop our singular voice, as you have so beautifully done, all the while growing from exposure to other singular voices. Hope that makes sense. PS poets have had such an influence on my writing. All of you are truly a blessings! Sending you the splendor of blessings, dear friend!!