Premiere Contest WinnerAutumn

Autumn is a flaming sky 
of burgundy beauty
filled with orange leaves gently dancing
as they fall upon your heart
evoking bittersweet memories
composed with the dying embers of summer
and ending in the faultless taste of
savoury imperfection.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Jent Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Very nice, paints a lovely picture that depicts the season. Great Job
Roper Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Shore Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 11:55 PM
Thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 3:24 PM
SO beautiful. A very well deserved top placement. Congrats.
Shore Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 11:55 PM
Thanks.
Scythe Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Thanks for blowing my mind with your writing powers. You win a good contest. Congratulations on being the first to ever win a Word Vision poetry contest. Best of luck to you, VS.
Shore Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Thank you. I really enjoyed writing this and am happy that you liked it.
Scythe Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Thanks for blowing my mind with your writing powers. You win a good contest. Congratulations on being the first to ever win a Word Vision poetry contest. Best of luck to you, VS.
Godwin Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:19 PM
ew la la, what a large, small treassure! A gem, for sure - first place worthy and reading fun flirty - a true joy to read. Congrats! All the best ... CayCay (me thinks your poem has been found)
Shore Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 10:09 PM
That's very kind of you to say. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Congrats on a fine piece and win.
Shore Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 10:08 PM
Thank you.
One Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Great imagery, some great lines in this reflective write...
Shore Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Thanks. :)
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