Autumn

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A midst the gigantic severe storm
U mbrellas swiftly flip inside out
T orrential rain blows all about
U nder solid black skies leaves flout
M assive old oaks loose form
N otwithstanding the eye of the storm

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2017 9:18:00 PM

GREAT acrostic, Sara. I like ones that are short like this one.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/30/2017 6:03:00 AM

Andrea, I like short to medium poems as well unless it really grabs me I don't like long ones..There is one called "Brown's Decent" by Robert Frost that I really enjoyed got a big laugh at that one..Sara

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/26/2017 7:03:00 PM

A very nice acrostic poem with powerful imagery and wonderful rhyme, which is not always easy to include with this form... Well penned, Sara!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/25/2017 5:21:00 AM

I surely enjoyed this wonderful write my friend! You have capture the essence of Autumn and the rainy parts of the season! But there are so many gorgeous days during this season too! I just loved your incredible poem here this morning! What a grandiose pieve, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2017 8:09:00 AM

Russell, Thanks for the visit to my page..I was thinking about the hurricane that came through here when writing this one..I do need to do another one including the beautiful leaves..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2017 3:05:00 PM

- Beautiful written, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2017 8:10:00 AM

SS, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent here..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2017 12:02:00 PM

Very seasonal autumnal poem Sara. I never use an umbrella I see too many 'twisted skeletons' in the litter bins as its often very windy here and they cannot sustain the ravages of the wind:-( hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2017 8:12:00 AM

Jan, Yes, in a windy rainstorm umbrellas are mostly just extra weight..LOL..Once there was a company that made one that they said was wind proof but I never owned one..I would imagine that they would have been quite expensive and would be a purchase that one would have to try to make last a lifetime..My girls used to get out the umbrella to go to the lake to go go swimming because it was sprinkling rain..LOL..Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2017 12:02:00 PM

A fun to read--lovely poem on autumn's storm and the foliage!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2017 8:14:00 AM

Vijay, Thanks for the visit to my page..Here some of the leaves survivied the strong winds but other leaves were shredded like they had been through a paper shredder..Sara