Autumn

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AUTUMN

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 12 OCTOBER 2016, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

Summer's memories Inscribed on golden old leaves Paved is winter's path! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 12 October 2016 5-7-5

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/12/2016 4:33:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/12/2016 6:04:00 PM

Thank you dear, Agnes! Welcome!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2016 11:50:00 AM

An absolute beauty of a haiku Demetrios I LOVE it:-) hugs Jan xx7 and fave

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/12/2016 1:48:00 PM

Jan, my dear friend, thank you so much for your precious visit and comment plus the fave!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 6:32:00 AM

- One more gem, beautifully - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/12/2016 7:00:00 AM

Thank you dearest friend, Anne-Lise for your kind visit and lovely comment!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 10/12/2016 3:41:00 AM

Beautifully written... A 7..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/12/2016 5:40:00 AM

Supraja, how wonderful your visit is! Thank you for commenting and grading!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/12/2016 2:11:00 AM

Lovely haiku with a beautiful last line ... a nice window ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/12/2016 5:42:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Probir! So nice to see your comment! The flower is in place!