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Autumn

Autumn Golden companion To the swiftly ageing year, Herald of Winter. Barry Stebbings 25/04/2016

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Date: 4/12/2017 12:14:00 PM
You are in or from the UK I guess. I'm enjoying following you & your expressions & thoughts. Keep pressing on. Happy Easter.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/13/2017 2:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Neil. Happy Easter. // Barry
Date: 5/5/2016 7:59:00 PM
GREAT job. I bet you have one for each season. I was thinking about the last one. Wouldn't spring be mother of seasons? Maybe it depends on one's location?
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/6/2016 9:41:00 AM
Hello Andrea, I do have one for each season, I was thinking of compiling them all together in one piece. I thought about Spring as Mother of the Seasons and decided the Haiku would describe the warmth and brilliance of Summer. I have put Winter as the Father of the Seasons as all the seasons depend on the quality of Winter, so Summer follows as the Mother of the Seasons. Thanks for the comment.
Date: 4/26/2016 7:10:00 AM
Strong imagery Barry, a joy to read.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/26/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank You, Lenny
Date: 4/25/2016 5:24:00 PM
beautiful haiku Barry - love the transition of the seasons:-) hugs Jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/26/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank You, Jan
Date: 4/25/2016 2:15:00 PM
I am still learning this form and it's stark realism captures my attention and heart! This Haiku has done exactly that!!!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/25/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thank you, Walter. Hope you find success with this form of poetry. Barry
Date: 4/25/2016 1:44:00 PM
Nicely worded with perfect 575 form and superb imagery. Well done my friend! Keith
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/25/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thank you, Keith. Barry
Date: 4/25/2016 1:22:00 PM
Ahhhhh!!! Enjoyed reading your work.. sara
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/25/2016 1:43:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Pleased you enjoyed.