Autumn

Autumn

      Golden companion
      To the swiftly ageing year,
      Herald of Winter.

      Barry Stebbings
      25/04/2016

autumnseasonshaiku

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Neil Alexander

Date: 4/12/2017 12:14:00 PM

You are in or from the UK I guess. I'm enjoying following you & your expressions & thoughts. Keep pressing on. Happy Easter.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/13/2017 2:56:00 AM

Thank you very much, Neil. Happy Easter. // Barry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2016 7:59:00 PM

GREAT job. I bet you have one for each season. I was thinking about the last one. Wouldn't spring be mother of seasons? Maybe it depends on one's location?

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/6/2016 9:41:00 AM

Hello Andrea, I do have one for each season, I was thinking of compiling them all together in one piece. I thought about Spring as Mother of the Seasons and decided the Haiku would describe the warmth and brilliance of Summer. I have put Winter as the Father of the Seasons as all the seasons depend on the quality of Winter, so Summer follows as the Mother of the Seasons. Thanks for the comment.