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Autumn

Autumnal trees
Shed their stunning leaves

Glorious gown of browns and gold
Nature’s delight for us to behold

26th January 2015

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Julia Ward

March 5, 2015 at 4:02 AM

A pretty poem. :) Julia

Jan Allison

March 5, 2015 at 4:03 AM

Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Lewis Holmes

February 7, 2015 at 5:24 PM

The simplest poems, like this, are often the best..nice write and thanks for the comment Jan...Pete

Jan Allison

February 7, 2015 at 5:27 PM

Thanks Pete:-) Many of my poems i would describe as 'simple' I do enjoy the haiku for so few words can really say so much:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Horne

January 29, 2015 at 4:32 PM

beautiful, Jan

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 4:38 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Jack:-) Hugs Jan x

Paul Callus

January 29, 2015 at 3:43 PM

Two solitary couplets that shine as they present a splendid picture of autumn's beauty! Well done, Jan!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 3:44 PM

Thanks Paul I was really pleased the way this one turned out:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

January 29, 2015 at 7:06 AM

Lovely poem, Jan. Your words paint that picture. Wish it was Autumn here...nothing but white snow everywhere and temps in the teens here . Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:27 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nathan D.

January 29, 2015 at 2:23 AM

reads like a haiku very cool.

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:28 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Nathan:-) Hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

January 28, 2015 at 7:46 AM

Stunningly beautiful poem and picture my dear friend, Jan. Hugging it and you. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots, Leonora

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:27 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Leonora:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

January 26, 2015 at 6:25 PM

Lovely!

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:27 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Etienne Lariviere

January 26, 2015 at 5:25 PM

La saison de l'amour, very pretty.

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:26 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Etienne:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

January 26, 2015 at 3:42 PM

Beautiful imagery in this poem.

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:26 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 26, 2015 at 2:29 PM

- Jan, thanks for beautiful poem (and picture) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:25 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

January 26, 2015 at 10:11 AM

Hello Jan. AUTUMN was BEAUTIFUL and a refreshing WRITE. I'm impatient for summer.

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:25 AM

I'm looking forward to the lighter warmer spring days:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

January 26, 2015 at 10:09 AM

a jewel of a piece that brings out the splendor of autumn, jan... awesome!.. huggs

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:25 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

January 26, 2015 at 9:46 AM

May we be so adored . . . such majesty in autumn and in your delightful words, you have brighten my morning. Light and love dear Jan. 7

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:24 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 26, 2015 at 9:11 AM

Only your poem could surpass the beauty of Autumn here, dear Jean!

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:24 AM

aww thank you so much Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

January 26, 2015 at 9:08 AM

Beautiful pen Jan! Enjoyed your autumn piece my dear friend. A 7 from me!Have a lovely day! Blessings! D. ^O^

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:23 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Dorian:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

January 26, 2015 at 8:28 AM

So beautiful and elegant!

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:23 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Arthur:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

January 26, 2015 at 7:46 AM

Jan, this poem is so pretty and warms my heart as I look out my window at piles and piles of white snow and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~

Jan Allison

January 29, 2015 at 11:22 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

January 26, 2015 at 3:41 AM

A beautiful picture you have penned with these couplets I don't know that it needs the photo your words are so much more. I wish that we had these colours in Autumn here they must be such an inspiration! Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

January 26, 2015 at 5:21 AM

Thanks Shane:-) Hugs Jan x