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Autumn

Autumn, It peeps over summers shoulders Like a baby over its mothers when getting bolder Then tip toes into your day when your tired Unannounced not always desired First a mild frost shows its might To scrunch the leaves over night Ideal for walking in when they fall Crunchy underfoot, kids love to kick them all The trees now have their colourful jackets on Leaves Of yellows golds and reds upon Berries of every hue the birds should know Eat them too soon and hungry they will go Autumn means the Canadian Geese come to stay They know exactly where they want to spend their day They squawk in the v formation in which they fly Catches the eys of every passer bye Autumn is the prelude to the full blown concerto of winter Whose notes linger on the cold cold air Sounds of laughter fill the air when families meet to skate On the iced over ponds that the ducks now hate Squirrels hoard the nuts to keep themselves alive as they nestle in the hollow tree, trying hard to survive Robins tweet their song so the gardener will hear, To turn over some earth for the worms to appear Smoking chimneys add to the scene Can you imagine the warmth of the glow within People happily sit around the fire so bright Wrapped up warm, drink in hand settled for the night Penned 02/01/2015

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Date: 1/12/2015 5:41:00 PM
Lovely piece..Nice work..Congrats on your win in this contest...
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:48:00 PM
anytime...PD
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:23:00 PM
Seren, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thank you Linda ...Seren
Date: 1/9/2015 1:52:00 PM
I forgot to say congrats on winning! You deserved this!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/10/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, appreciated ....Seren
Date: 1/9/2015 1:51:00 PM
Liking this poem only shows what great taste I have !!! :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/10/2015 8:10:00 AM
Diolwch Etienne, .....Seren
Date: 1/6/2015 7:17:00 AM
Congratz on the win Seren. Your poem made me imagine the autumn times so beautifully while its still winter
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2015 7:50:00 AM
Thank you my friend, hope you will enjoy PoetrySoup and its all as I said it was........Seren
Date: 1/6/2015 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Seren!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2015 7:51:00 AM
thank you Dr Upma, I am glad you enjoyed it ....Seren
Date: 1/5/2015 11:02:00 PM
There are so many wonderful poems in this contest and yours is among the wonderful, Seren. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:52:00 PM
Wow I nearly pulled it out I wasnt sure of it....Seren
Date: 1/5/2015 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful Autumn poem, Seren. Congratulations on your nice win! Sandra
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2015 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra........Seren
Date: 1/5/2015 10:07:00 AM
While washing dishes this morning I was watching the squirrels gathering acorns still under the tree outside and I wondered if they had yet found enough. Winter has arrived and the trees have lost their colored jackets and the limbs are bare in their hibernation... but oh, how I love the autumn... and you have captured it well in your lines. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:54:00 PM
Me too Debra thanks for your congrats....Seren
Date: 1/5/2015 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations Seren on your well deserved win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/5/2015 9:22:00 AM
I enjoyed a fine personification of autumn, congrats on the win, Seren
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:55:00 PM
Thank you Ram, means a lot to me your comments ....Seren
Date: 1/5/2015 7:53:00 AM
gorgeous imagery Seren congrats on win hugs
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:56:00 PM
Shadow how can I say thank you to you for including me on your winners, I wasnt too sure of it at all....Seren
Date: 1/5/2015 7:44:00 AM
wonderful personification and imagery - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:57:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I love Autumn.....Seren
Date: 1/4/2015 12:45:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:57:00 PM
Thank you my friend .....Seren

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