Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Tanka

Autumn

Summer is gone now
and fall with her beautiful face
Softly just arrives.
Spreading joy with her colours
And thrilling with her magic.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
Copyright@2014


8.10.2014

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Paul Schneiter December 8, 2014 at 6:40 AM Spare, uncluttered poetry is often the most touching. That quality distinguishes this poem. It's a marvel. I love it. God Bless!

Charmaine Chircop November 20, 2014 at 6:08 PM So beautiful this is!! Dorian Petersen Potter November 20, 2014 at 11:14 PM Thank you Charmaine! :) xxxx D.

Cona Adams November 13, 2014 at 9:27 AM Autumn is special, and you have written a vivid picture for us. Thanks for sharing. I gave it a seven. Dorian Petersen Potter November 20, 2014 at 11:13 PM Thank you Cona! :) xxxx D

Tim Smith October 8, 2014 at 4:27 PM This is fantastic Dorian...You write well in so many forms...hugs Tim

Jan Allison October 8, 2014 at 3:27 PM simply stunning! Hugs jan xxx Dorian Petersen Potter November 20, 2014 at 11:12 PM Thank you Jan! :) xxxx D