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Autumn

Autumn arrives and trees are brown
Up comes the wind, leaves tumbling down
They do not make the slightest sound
Upon the ground they formed a tapestry of colors
Merrily furling and swirling as the wind comes puffing by
No seasons has such beauty as this autumnal face. 

                  
September 30, 2014:
Form: Acrostic
Sixth Place win
Seasonal Acrostic by Charlotte Puddifet

Copyright © Dr.Ram Mehta | Year Posted 2014

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/12/2014 10:25:00 AM Brilliant write Dr Ram! Congrats on awesome win! Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 10/11/2014 6:56:00 PM Fine write, Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/11/2014 6:34:00 PM I loved it the first time and I love it now. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 10/11/2014 6:21:00 PM I really like the repetition of rhyme in this - brown/down/sound/ground/furling/swirling - and the juxtaposition of up/down in that second line; also the idea of autumn having a face, quite a memorable image - congrats on your win in my contest :) Login to Reply Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/12/2014 1:39:00 AM Thanks for picking up my poem, Charlotte

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 10/11/2014 6:05:00 PM Congrats on the win Dr. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/11/2014 5:49:00 PM very lovely one, Dr. Ram. Big congrats to you. It was good to see this one again. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2014 5:39:00 PM wonderful to see this beautiful image and poem again Dr Mehta:-) many congrats hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/6/2014 9:13:00 AM Very aptly described beautiful season, Dr. Your 5th line is a sure winner. well done. // paul Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/3/2014 4:43:00 AM Truly the beauty of Autumn is majestic as your poem and the picture Dr. Metha! Login to Reply

John Trainer Date: 10/2/2014 2:52:00 PM Lovely poem. This is the season that truly inspires me. Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/2/2014 7:48:00 AM i love your letter M line.. :) Very adorable scene when the leaves furl and swirl.. very colorful.. :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/2/2014 7:49:00 AM love the picture neath it.. :D

Joyce Johnson Date: 10/1/2014 9:44:00 PM Very nice Dr. Mehta and thank you for commenting on mine. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/1/2014 3:54:00 PM well done, Dr. Ram. I think poets with a melancholy slant are those who will choose autumn. It is the season I did for this contest,just have not posted it yet! Login to Reply

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 10/1/2014 8:40:00 AM A veritable feast for the eyes.. autumn.. as nature wears a smörgåsbord of colors. In India , you know, the picture is different. However, in essence they are the same.Your poem has captured the rhythm of Autumn perfectly with its sight, sound and soul. Thank you Mehtasaab > rajat c Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/1/2014 3:33:00 AM Autumn in Ontario where I live would knock your eyes out of your sockets it is so beautiful. Your poem captures that. Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/1/2014 11:19:00 AM I am in Toronto Dr. Mehta. Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/1/2014 5:55:00 AM I am quite familiar with Ontario autumn. My daughter lives in Windsor and a son in Toronto, Maurice.

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 9/30/2014 6:45:00 PM Wonderful poem with a beautiful picture to go with it. Login to Reply

Gary Dye Date: 9/30/2014 1:06:00 PM Wonderfully descriptive; I love the term autumnal face -truly a 7 thank and be blessed Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/30/2014 9:24:00 AM beautifully painted as always ram excellent vision Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/30/2014 7:45:00 AM - Although the fall is beautiful, it can be stormy hard - Lovely poem and image Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/30/2014 7:41:00 AM Beautiful photographic image to match the lovely imagery in the poem Good luck in the contest:) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply