Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Acrostic

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Autumn

Autumn arrives and trees are brown
Up comes the wind, leaves tumbling down
They do not make the slightest sound
Upon the ground they formed a tapestry of colors
Merrily furling and swirling as the wind comes puffing by
No seasons has such beauty as this autumnal face. 

                  
September 30, 2014:
Form: Acrostic
Sixth Place win
Seasonal Acrostic by Charlotte Puddifet

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 12, 2014 at 10:25 AM Brilliant write Dr Ram! Congrats on awesome win!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair October 11, 2014 at 6:56 PM Fine write, Congrats on the win.

Maurice Yvonne October 11, 2014 at 6:34 PM I loved it the first time and I love it now. Congratulations on your win.

Charlotte Puddifoot October 11, 2014 at 6:21 PM I really like the repetition of rhyme in this - brown/down/sound/ground/furling/swirling - and the juxtaposition of up/down in that second line; also the idea of autumn having a face, quite a memorable image - congrats on your win in my contest :) Dr.Ram Mehta October 12, 2014 at 1:39 AM Thanks for picking up my poem, Charlotte

Kayod5 Kayode October 11, 2014 at 6:05 PM Congrats on the win Dr.

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2014 at 5:49 PM very lovely one, Dr. Ram. Big congrats to you. It was good to see this one again.

Jan Allison October 11, 2014 at 5:39 PM wonderful to see this beautiful image and poem again Dr Mehta:-) many congrats hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus October 6, 2014 at 9:13 AM Very aptly described beautiful season, Dr. Your 5th line is a sure winner. well done. // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis October 3, 2014 at 4:43 AM Truly the beauty of Autumn is majestic as your poem and the picture Dr. Metha!

John Trainer October 2, 2014 at 2:52 PM Lovely poem. This is the season that truly inspires me.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 2, 2014 at 7:48 AM i love your letter M line.. :) Very adorable scene when the leaves furl and swirl.. very colorful.. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 2, 2014 at 7:49 AM love the picture neath it.. :D

Joyce Johnson October 1, 2014 at 9:44 PM Very nice Dr. Mehta and thank you for commenting on mine. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2014 at 3:54 PM well done, Dr. Ram. I think poets with a melancholy slant are those who will choose autumn. It is the season I did for this contest,just have not posted it yet!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 1, 2014 at 8:40 AM A veritable feast for the eyes.. autumn.. as nature wears a smörgåsbord of colors. In India , you know, the picture is different. However, in essence they are the same.Your poem has captured the rhythm of Autumn perfectly with its sight, sound and soul. Thank you Mehtasaab > rajat c

Maurice Yvonne October 1, 2014 at 3:33 AM Autumn in Ontario where I live would knock your eyes out of your sockets it is so beautiful. Your poem captures that. Maurice Yvonne October 1, 2014 at 11:19 AM I am in Toronto Dr. Mehta. Dr.Ram Mehta October 1, 2014 at 5:55 AM I am quite familiar with Ontario autumn. My daughter lives in Windsor and a son in Toronto, Maurice.

Brenda Meier-Hans September 30, 2014 at 6:45 PM Wonderful poem with a beautiful picture to go with it.

Gary Dye September 30, 2014 at 1:06 PM Wonderfully descriptive; I love the term autumnal face -truly a 7 thank and be blessed

Liam Mcdaid September 30, 2014 at 9:24 AM beautifully painted as always ram excellent vision

Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2014 at 7:45 AM - Although the fall is beautiful, it can be stormy hard - Lovely poem and image Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 30, 2014 at 7:41 AM Beautiful photographic image to match the lovely imagery in the poem Good luck in the contest:) Hugs jan xx