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Autumn arrives and trees are brown Up comes the wind, leaves tumbling down They do not make the slightest sound Upon the ground they formed a tapestry of colors Merrily furling and swirling as the wind comes puffing by No seasons has such beauty as this autumnal face. September 30, 2014: Form: Acrostic Sixth Place win Seasonal Acrostic by Charlotte Puddifet

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 10:25:00 AM

Brilliant write Dr Ram! Congrats on awesome win!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/11/2014 6:56:00 PM

Fine write, Congrats on the win.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/11/2014 6:34:00 PM

I loved it the first time and I love it now. Congratulations on your win.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/11/2014 6:21:00 PM

I really like the repetition of rhyme in this - brown/down/sound/ground/furling/swirling - and the juxtaposition of up/down in that second line; also the idea of autumn having a face, quite a memorable image - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/12/2014 1:39:00 AM

Thanks for picking up my poem, Charlotte

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/11/2014 6:05:00 PM

Congrats on the win Dr.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2014 5:49:00 PM

very lovely one, Dr. Ram. Big congrats to you. It was good to see this one again.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2014 5:39:00 PM

wonderful to see this beautiful image and poem again Dr Mehta:-) many congrats hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2014 9:13:00 AM

Very aptly described beautiful season, Dr. Your 5th line is a sure winner. well done. // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/3/2014 4:43:00 AM

Truly the beauty of Autumn is majestic as your poem and the picture Dr. Metha!

John Trainer

Date: 10/2/2014 2:52:00 PM

Lovely poem. This is the season that truly inspires me.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/2/2014 7:48:00 AM

i love your letter M line.. :) Very adorable scene when the leaves furl and swirl.. very colorful.. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/2/2014 7:49:00 AM

love the picture neath it.. :D

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/1/2014 9:44:00 PM

Very nice Dr. Mehta and thank you for commenting on mine. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2014 3:54:00 PM

well done, Dr. Ram. I think poets with a melancholy slant are those who will choose autumn. It is the season I did for this contest,just have not posted it yet!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/1/2014 8:40:00 AM

A veritable feast for the eyes.. autumn.. as nature wears a smörgåsbord of colors. In India , you know, the picture is different. However, in essence they are the same.Your poem has captured the rhythm of Autumn perfectly with its sight, sound and soul. Thank you Mehtasaab > rajat c

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/1/2014 3:33:00 AM

Autumn in Ontario where I live would knock your eyes out of your sockets it is so beautiful. Your poem captures that.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/1/2014 11:19:00 AM

I am in Toronto Dr. Mehta.

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/1/2014 5:55:00 AM

I am quite familiar with Ontario autumn. My daughter lives in Windsor and a son in Toronto, Maurice.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/30/2014 6:45:00 PM

Wonderful poem with a beautiful picture to go with it.

Gary Dye

Date: 9/30/2014 1:06:00 PM

Wonderfully descriptive; I love the term autumnal face -truly a 7 thank and be blessed

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/30/2014 9:24:00 AM

beautifully painted as always ram excellent vision

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2014 7:45:00 AM

- Although the fall is beautiful, it can be stormy hard - Lovely poem and image Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/30/2014 7:41:00 AM

Beautiful photographic image to match the lovely imagery in the poem Good luck in the contest:) Hugs jan xx