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I let her go because I needed to know, To know myself, Know whether I was strong enough Brave enough To face the world alone. I let her go because I needed to know To know the world Know what was out there, answer old questions Find new ones to ask myself, To grow. I let her go because in the end I could no longer smell the daffodils I could no longer taste the morning dew The walls were piled up too high All about And all the light had been shut out. I let her go because I felt I had to Because I wanted to, needed to Watch her go, to know whether or not I could watch her go, knowing she was gone for good I let her go because I could. Carlos

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Date: 6/20/2013 9:56:00 AM
I hope you continue to post on the soup Carlos, and grow with this community, a sad poem, and hope you did the right thing, one always looks out for change... always~ Linda
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Date: 6/14/2013 6:50:00 AM
hi Carlos welcome to Poetry Soup a factual poem written well much enjoyed reading it Shadow
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