Autumn

Now I realize The autumns are not alike As this year's autumn, More than all of the autumns I feel the scream of the leaves.

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/14/2012 4:29:00 AM

Big congrats from Spain xx

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/13/2012 10:29:00 PM

Great tanka, like your last line, the colours are like screams... well done. Lee

Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2012 8:25:00 AM

Excellent Tanka here Goran!Congrats on the win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2012 12:30:00 AM

I sure remember this one and glad to see it here on the winners' list . Congrats.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2012 12:50:00 PM

A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Goran. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2012 12:45:00 AM

wow, Amazing!!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/7/2012 8:24:00 PM

Wonderful..you are so right..and I had not thought of that. BG

Joseph May

Date: 10/7/2012 5:14:00 PM

nicely written Goran....love the "scream line....thanks for stopping by .....Joseph