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autumn

cars sound the alarm autumn delivers it's storm night time is shattered window faces watch our world of broken branches wheelie-bins gone rogue when tomorrow comes boys will collect their conkers grown men their shovels

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:32:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Martin Challender
Date: 10/22/2024 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Sara. I really do appreciate the positive feedback. Best wishes to you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 11:09:00 PM

These are quite original and different from the ordinary. I enjoyed them.

Martin Challender
Date: 10/14/2024 11:22:00 PM

Many thanks Andrea. I'm glad you enjoyed them. Best regards.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:29:00 PM

Martin, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku set.

Martin Challender
Date: 10/8/2024 11:54:00 PM

Many thanks Tania. This was an enjoyable contest, I look forward to reading other poets' interpretation of autumn in haiku verse!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/24/2024 9:03:00 PM

Autumn clean up can be fun in the crisp air with laughter with friends. I like the description in these words.

Martin Challender
Date: 9/24/2024 11:45:00 PM

Thanks Hilda. I was pleased with how this haiku turned out. So glad for feedback. Best wishes.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/24/2024 4:50:00 AM

Perfect haiku Martin, your last one took me back, chucking stones and bits of wood up at the conker trees trying to bring them down, every year at school was the conker season, now banned on health and safety grounds. Happy days, long gone now. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Martin Challender
Date: 9/24/2024 5:00:00 AM

Many thanks Tom. It was a bit nostalgic really & sadly children don't play conkers anymore. Health & safety or not though, I must admit to throwing stones & branches for conkers with the grand-kids only the other week!!! Take care :)