Autumn

chickadee wing breeze petals and seeds a flutter~ sunflower setting

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2024 1:27:00 PM

Ahh!! So nice. I am so glad that I chose this one to read today. Sara K

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2024 8:52:00 AM

Thank you Sara! :) xomo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/24/2024 10:57:00 AM

Hi Mo! Don't know how I have missed your postings! Wonderful final line with a delightful double meaning! Enjoyed. Sending you blessings of autumn joy.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/24/2024 8:30:00 PM

Thank you lovely! Blessings to you too, xomo!

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 9/24/2024 12:48:00 AM

Such a nice haiku!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/24/2024 8:29:00 PM

Thank you! I’m just adoring the chickadees, this is for them really, delighted you like it. xomo