Christuraj Alex Poet Pantoum

Autumn

Immaculate blue sky shares many myths!
Environ, like Da Vinci paintings, glows!
Flies and bees compete for nectar-filled piths!
Kissing the blooms the romantic breeze blows!

Environ, like Da Vinci paintings, glows!
To the nature's designs, each stone obeys!
Kissing the blooms the romantic breeze blows!
Each within the rhythm of the universe stays!

To the nature's designs, each stone obeys!
Flies and bees compete for nectar-filled piths!
Each within the rhythm of the universe stays!
Immaculate blue sky shares many myths!


27 September 2022
Autumn Pantoum Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Sally Eslinger September 30, 2022 at 5:27 AM An accomplish autumn song, with such vibrant imagery and the repetitions carrying me along. With artist education, there is lots of training in color and thus lots of notes about any painting to do/ever done of autumn’s sky - a particular blue-violet that stunningly interacts with trees’ golds& oranges, xox

Kim Rodrigues September 28, 2022 at 10:39 AM Interesting! Like: Flies and bees compete for nectar-filled piths