Notes About The Poem

Date: August 22, 2022
For: Triolet – Old or New Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
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Autumn

Shadow's secrets reflect and shift
                              Autumn’s hues shimmer in the haze
                              Birds on their pilgrimage fly swift
                              Shadow’s secrets reflect and shift
                              A carousel of low clouds drift
                              Embers of summers fiery blaze
                              Shadow’s secrets reflect and shift
                              Autumn’s hues shimmer in the haze
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Tor Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 3:35 AM
Another superb Autumn Poem from you. You have the Autumn spirit flowing through your muse. God bless you...
Calasibetta Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 11:34 AM
Thank you so much….you always brighten my day! :)Paulette
Rose  Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 3:21 PM
When you put your mind to pen you always shimmer alongside your poetry Paulette, This is a beauty, a keeper, I enjoyed hearing you reading it verbatim Divina, congrats xo
Calasibetta Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 3:59 AM
Thank you for your kind words! XoP
Goldsmith Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. A Beautiful Autumn write. I love this time of the year. Have a great/blessed day...................
Calasibetta Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Hi Paula, thanks for stopping by to comment~yes, Autumn is very inspiring, I would agree. Glad you enjoyed my write. :)Paulette
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 1:31 AM
A gorgeous autumn Triolet Paulette. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings xxoo
Calasibetta Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so much, Connie~enjoyed the challenge. :)Paulette
La France Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Paulette, a beautiful Triolet and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
May Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 1:56 PM
Lovely autumn verse Paulette, Congrats on your win
Calasibetta Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 2:27 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for the placement in your contest, I am honored! :)Paulette
Buhagiar Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 11:21 AM
Loved the carousel of clouds. Seems an easy form but I doubt it. Well done and best for a win.
Calasibetta Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Victor. I always appreciate your stopping by. :)Paulette
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