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Autumn

Shadow’s secrets reflect and shift Autumn’s hues shimmer in the haze Birds on their pilgrimage fly swift Shadow’s secrets reflect and shift A carousel of low clouds drift Embers of summers fiery blaze Shadow’s secrets reflect and shift Autumn’s hues shimmer in the haze Date: August 22, 2022 For: Triolet – Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Rhyme verified on rhymezone.com Syllables verified on howmanysyllables.com

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/1/2022 3:35:00 AM

Another superb Autumn Poem from you. You have the Autumn spirit flowing through your muse. God bless you...

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 9/2/2022 11:34:00 AM

Thank you so much….you always brighten my day! :)Paulette

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 8/25/2022 8:52:00 PM

Paulette, this is a beautiful Triolet and well-developed. When you consider what you have done with only 8 lines, that's amazing. Congratulations on your win!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/29/2022 3:58:00 AM

Carol, thank you for stopping by to comment~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/25/2022 3:21:00 PM

When you put your mind to pen you always shimmer alongside your poetry Paulette, This is a beauty, a keeper, I enjoyed hearing you reading it verbatim Divina, congrats xo

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/29/2022 3:59:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words! XoP

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/25/2022 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A Beautiful Autumn write. I love this time of the year. Have a great/blessed day...................

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/25/2022 2:28:00 PM

Hi Paula, thanks for stopping by to comment~yes, Autumn is very inspiring, I would agree. Glad you enjoyed my write. :)Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2022 1:31:00 AM

A gorgeous autumn Triolet Paulette. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/25/2022 2:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie~enjoyed the challenge. :)Paulette

Constance La France

Date: 8/24/2022 1:58:00 PM

Paulette, a beautiful Triolet and congratulations on your win in the contest ~

Joseph May

Date: 8/24/2022 1:56:00 PM

Lovely autumn verse Paulette, Congrats on your win

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/25/2022 2:27:00 PM

Joseph, thank you so much for the placement in your contest, I am honored! :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/22/2022 11:21:00 AM

Loved the carousel of clouds. Seems an easy form but I doubt it. Well done and best for a win.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/22/2022 2:14:00 PM

Thank you Victor. I always appreciate your stopping by. :)Paulette