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Autumn

twirling swirling leaves
dead foliage in freefall
logs ablaze in grate

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01/23/21

autumnhaiku

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John Hardison

January 23, 2021 at 5:55 PM

You don't need my comment. You have enough already. BUT, sometime such a fall is beyond words. You went beyond. Enjoy the fall. Peace, Love and Joy.

Jan Allison

January 24, 2021 at 10:55 AM

aww thanks for such a sweet comment John:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

January 23, 2021 at 1:37 PM

wow! you've summed up an entire season in a haiku! wonderfully done, jan...

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 2:08 PM

Thanks Ilene, Charlotte always encouraged me to write short forms, I hope she likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Brian Sambourne

January 23, 2021 at 12:59 PM

Superb. You've captured fall in all its grand essence in just 3 lines. Best wishes, Brian

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 1:55 PM

Thanks Brian:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

January 23, 2021 at 12:31 PM

Nice imagery, I do love the fall.

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 1:55 PM

Me too Mark:-) hugs Jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 23, 2021 at 12:21 PM

- Beautiful ... another top winning poem, Jan :) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 1:54 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise I hope Charlotte likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

January 23, 2021 at 12:03 PM

Pretty, Jan!

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 1:54 PM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

January 23, 2021 at 10:44 AM

All that is missing is the steak! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 11:27 AM

mmm i got some fillet steak yesterday... come dine with me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

January 23, 2021 at 10:29 AM

Hi Jan, What a lovely haiku for the autumn season. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 11:26 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

January 23, 2021 at 9:56 AM

Love the homey feel of the blazing logs and twirling leaves, brings back the color and comfort of fall~

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 10:06 AM

thanks Michelle:-) I hope Charlotte likes it she always encouraged me to write short forms:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

January 23, 2021 at 8:58 AM

You've captured the autumn scene well Jan, nothing beats a crackling log fire, took me back to when I was a boy, Hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 10:05 AM

thanks Tom it really is the weather for comfort food and snuggling up at home:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

January 23, 2021 at 8:30 AM

A haiku written in perfect form. Best for a win. ~~

Jan Allison

January 23, 2021 at 8:45 AM

Thanks Victor Charlotte has always encouraged me to write short forms, I hope she likes this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Autumn

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