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twirling swirling leaves dead foliage in freefall logs ablaze in grate Open Poetry 1 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot 01/23/21

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John Hardison

Date: 1/23/2021 5:55:00 PM

You don't need my comment. You have enough already. BUT, sometime such a fall is beyond words. You went beyond. Enjoy the fall. Peace, Love and Joy.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2021 10:55:00 AM

aww thanks for such a sweet comment John:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/23/2021 1:37:00 PM

wow! you've summed up an entire season in a haiku! wonderfully done, jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 2:08:00 PM

Thanks Ilene, Charlotte always encouraged me to write short forms, I hope she likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/23/2021 12:59:00 PM

Superb. You've captured fall in all its grand essence in just 3 lines. Best wishes, Brian

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 1:55:00 PM

Thanks Brian:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/23/2021 12:31:00 PM

Nice imagery, I do love the fall.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 1:55:00 PM

Me too Mark:-) hugs Jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2021 12:21:00 PM

- Beautiful ... another top winning poem, Jan :) - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise I hope Charlotte likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/23/2021 12:03:00 PM

Pretty, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/23/2021 10:44:00 AM

All that is missing is the steak! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 11:27:00 AM

mmm i got some fillet steak yesterday... come dine with me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/23/2021 10:29:00 AM

Hi Jan, What a lovely haiku for the autumn season. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 11:26:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/23/2021 9:56:00 AM

Love the homey feel of the blazing logs and twirling leaves, brings back the color and comfort of fall~

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 10:06:00 AM

thanks Michelle:-) I hope Charlotte likes it she always encouraged me to write short forms:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/23/2021 8:58:00 AM

You've captured the autumn scene well Jan, nothing beats a crackling log fire, took me back to when I was a boy, Hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 10:05:00 AM

thanks Tom it really is the weather for comfort food and snuggling up at home:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/23/2021 8:30:00 AM

A haiku written in perfect form. Best for a win. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Victor Charlotte has always encouraged me to write short forms, I hope she likes this poem:-) hugs Jan xx