Autumn

Autumn arrives, its breath a cool breeze. Birds forming echelons travel the sky. Sunlight bedazzles the bright leaves of trees. Poets like me may be prone to sigh, wistfully bidding the summer goodbye. Aug. 24, 2019 Contest: Writing Challenge 3, August 2019- Five Lines- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode Form I used: An English Quintain is a poem that consists of five lines hence the "quint" in quintain. A quintain does not have a specific length for each line. It can be as short or as long as the poet likes. The rhyme scheme of an English quintain is a/b/a/b/b.
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Hawkens Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 3:27 PM
Beautifully written poem. Fall is my favorite time of year. And you captured the essence of summer giving way. Thank you for sharing this.
La France Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with your lovely Quintain ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 11:50 PM
YEP, Here your poem is at the top of the winner's list. I loved this beauty Andrea. Congratulations! xxoo
Johnson Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:57 PM
There's nothing left of summer's breeze. Except the coolness of heat to ease. With hint's of season's change to come. And sounds of distant, bah rumpa bum bum. <3 :)
Scars Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 12:56 PM
beautiful imagery and flow :) congrats sweet Andrea :)-luloo
Gondolf Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea, I enjoyed your seasonal poem. Even though it's been hot here in Texas lately, I'm not ready for summer to end. Hugs, John
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:16 AM
- Goodbye, summer ... welcome autumn - Congratulations on your top win, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your great win. Fine imagery on autumn.
Mcgee Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 7:23 PM
Yes, I too wistfully bid summer goodbye...nicely done Andrea...Congrats on your first place
Callus Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 3:29 PM
You ably show autumn's allure, Andrea, and yet you wish that summer would linger some more. ~ Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Cheney Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 9:43 AM
That moment when we take note of a change in season has always held an inspirational feel, so does this poem as it captures nicely that feeling.
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 1:49 PM
love this thoughtful piece
Foster Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 12:20 AM
So sweet. I love the colors of fall. Tea under the tree at noon, with tiny fairies that dance while they serve cupcakes... Hugs my friend. Have the best sigh...ever... Ann
Godwin Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 11:43 PM
Simply lovely, as lovely as autumn itself. Love, CayCay
Anish Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 6:41 PM
I look forward to autumn - we had a very hot summer here in NYC. Nice use of form and thank you for your kind words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
One Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Lots of imagery in your Quintain..
Sergi Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Hi Andrea: I an feel the ebb of the season passing away. beautifully done! (Unfortunately I live in Florida)
Wolf Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Light as a feather. Nicely entry for the contest, Andrea! :) gw
Pandit Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Enjoyed the feel of autumn's arrival..all the best, Andrea.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 7:02 AM
"sunlight bedazzles the bright leaves of trees" - I was noticing this exact thing this morning but did not say it in such a poetic way! Good luck in Constance's contest, my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 9:45 PM
I know how much you enjoy summer living in the Four Seasons. I feel just the opposite. It has been so humid here most of us are looking forward to the cooler fall. Our fall and winter are one in the same. You have given emotion to the seasons in this beauty Andrea. I will see this on the winner's list, I hope! : ) xxoo
Ashley Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 9:35 PM
Your melancholy is beautifully captured in your exceptional poem, Andrea. Lovely imagery. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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