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Autumn- Merse

frost like a silver queen makes yellow sheen on bed of leaves with ruby emerald gloss! wisp of wind sails across shuffling the patterns as crimson rays heave a sigh and move on! 123456 654321 syllables 1st placement Merse 2 poetry contest Malabika Choudhury sponsored written 20/09/21

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/26/2021 8:58:00 PM

Dear Krish, your use of brilliant colors is exquisite. “Frost like a silver queen” - such a fantastic image to start a poem filled with beautiful imagery. Your creative pen is lovely and lively capturing the spirit of Fall with finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/26/2021 11:24:00 PM

Susan thanks! delighted to have your views and you are always kind!:)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/26/2021 11:01:00 AM

Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Krish. Love the lines, frost like a silver queen and the wind, heave a sigh and move on. congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/26/2021 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Eve for your kind words of appreciation! Kindest regards Krish

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 9/26/2021 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations. I knew this would fetch a too win. Was really well done. Keep it up!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/26/2021 9:45:00 AM

Thanks Rama!:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/26/2021 6:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/26/2021 6:13:00 AM

Thanks Mala! Thanks for this brand new version! looks very popular!!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/25/2021 11:03:00 AM

So many beautiful and very inventive images dance through your poem Krish - "sails," "shuffling," "heaves." The movement in your merse is in itself a picture of fall. Congratulations!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/25/2021 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Sam! your analytical comments, I love! Thanks once again!:)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 9/24/2021 10:11:00 AM

Great imagery. Loved the way you described fall. Unique. Hope you have a wonderful weekend.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/24/2021 11:24:00 AM

Thanks Rama!! yes, indeed!