Aurora-Waka

Aurora rides 
in golden chariot
coming down to the sleepy world.
the music of her tread~
a wake up call.

8th grademorningverse

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Kim Rodrigues

June 17, 2026 at 7:40 PM

This is a lovely one, Valsa! Congrats!

Sara Kendrick

June 17, 2026 at 1:31 PM

Creative winning work. I am delighted it was on the winners' list. Congratulations, Valsa. Way to go. Sara K.

JC Brul

June 17, 2026 at 3:37 AM

Spectacular! I could vividly imagine the scene as if am there! Congratulations on your top win! A fave ^____ ^

Joanna Daniel

June 15, 2026 at 9:51 PM

Very creative, Valsa, congratulations:)

Krishnanand Guptar

June 15, 2026 at 12:32 PM

Congratulations Valsa on shating the top win in this contest with a lovely WAKA , picturesque with beautiful imagery and pleasant to read,. Wish you a delightful day.

Paige Hind

May 30, 2026 at 6:50 PM

beautiful <3

Ink Empress

May 26, 2026 at 4:21 AM

So pretty! Especially love “the music of her tread~ a wake up call.” Just stunning sweet valsa! Loving the wordplay and the flow in this! Best wishes always ~ sending you light always