Auroras Paint Party

Upon the stage, curtains wave and part; halos arise from black velvet canvas, an aurora-lime dance. Arced streamers among the nimbus lends it’s flavors of cherry and orange, personality to a taste of the ethers. A display of lavender-pink tones gift electric kisses and join the promenade. A luminous do-see-do sparks crescendo, a gods warm breath upon the northern winds and the waters echo the notes sung by the goddess of the dawn. She dines and dances her masterpiece upon heaven’s canvas.
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Neumann Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 7:38 AM
A masterpiece written from your canvass. Kind wishes, Kai
Kiser Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 2:07 AM
Wow, thanks Kai.
Wolf Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 1:08 PM
Truly, a portrait of the poet as a young artist! Magnifique, M.L! Peace and Joy, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 2:07 AM
Thank you Gershon.
Hopper Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Lovely!
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:19 AM
Thanks Anna.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 7:54 AM
This promenade makes me want to dance and dine.
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:20 AM
Dance away...the light's will play for you.
Cohen Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 5:51 PM
Very nice! I'm a sucker for the aurora. You did it justice and then some. "lime-dance" and waving curtains very descriptive.
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:20 AM
Thanks so much.
Sands Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful M.L. :)
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:20 AM
Thanks again.
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 9:29 AM
Exquisite imagery, in superb vocabulary--an aurora-lime dance...She dines and dances her masterpiece upon heaven’s canvas. A painting masterfully painted.
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:20 AM
Wow, thanks so much Vijay; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Lane Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 8:16 AM
"Upon heaven's canvas"... a wonderful line. As a painter, your verses appeal to me and make me feel like pulling out a black canvas, but the hand of no human can recreate that sort of beauty. A grand write, M.L.
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:21 AM
I'm glad it made you feel like painting; we all have our interpretations...as long as it's original...go for it and thanks.
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 8:08 AM
WOW ML such vivid imagery, you have brought the aurora borealis to life with your wonderful words. I especially love the description in the second stanza:-) its on my bucket list to see the lights and I recently wrote a poem on them:-) a MASSIVE fave:-) hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Many thanks Jan and I hope you get to see them.
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