Aurora of Elysium

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elysian adorned with faultless time-dream bits of insight trigger dim emotions memory gives warmness spooky how light needs haziness to thrive drew me away from odyssey I cling to Inner peace exists in the sky awaken the sun egg-yellow in tone In the midst of oceanic aurora with blue shells Half bleared-eye embraced in soul stance of shrewdness as though prevail intertwined In a vast ocean of you forgotten rootless cast to the verge we each without lacking land Written: June 24, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/3/2022 10:40:00 AM

I've missed so much of your poetry these last two weeks. Your poetry is a blessing to my life and an inspiration to my own writing growth. Thanks for sharing with such outsyanding imagery. Bill

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/26/2022 4:35:00 AM

Glorification of Elysian beauty accompanied by profound thoughts, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!

Valsa George

Date: 6/25/2022 9:16:00 AM

"awaken the sun egg-yellow in tone In the midst of oceanic aurora with blue shells".... Clear illustration of the image shown. You bring before us the enigmatic elysian beauty bathed in aurora and sedate us with the magic of your diction. Wonderful writing, heading for a top win in the contest.... !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/25/2022 5:11:00 AM

You are on roll my friend. This poem is awesome--adorning poetic nuggets. A FAVE from me for your wonderful vocabulary. No doubt a winner.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/25/2022 1:17:00 AM

As beautiful as the picture.