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Aurora in the Ossuary - Broken but bold enough to bounce back

Written: August 14, 2025, for Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon ******* I writhed in the womb of a necrotic hush, a stygian silence where barghests lurk— My slack-jawed soul, sodden with oblivion lull, clanged against the obelisk of despair. The wound, a molten mouth of aurora, sizzled with sacred suction— a fipple of fire, ineffable and fecund, where pestilence pirouetted with puissance. I danced—yes, I danced— in the desiccation of my demise, a gavotte of soulfulness, My blood is a rubicund aria of rapture. Alabaster bones bore the torque of truth, Each fracture is a triptych of ephemera and flame. I was a poltergeist of my former self, grappling through the noosphere multivocal maze. The stench of bygone hexes clung to lava rock, But I, stalwart and sinewed with mettle. careened past the clamor of puerile pabulum, past the gossamer glamor of grief. I was broken—yes— but bold enough to resuscitate, to regale the necromancy of my rebirth, to supplant sorrow with the sacred sizzle of self. Now I stand, an empyrean echo, a veridical vestige of velvet versatility— my heart, a burnished niche of noble hope, My spirit resembles a smooth, celestial sunset. Let the world scrutinize my scars, They are not grotesque—they are garrulous. They speak in tongues of alchemy and amaranthine ache, a quixotic quiddity, a quintessence of comeback.
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George Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 12:37 AM
Back to your beautiful poem once more with Congratulations on your top win, dear friend Lasaad.
Guptar Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations, dear poet, on being among the top winners in this contest with an exquisite poem, your unmatched diction, out of common imagery and a flowing rhythm. It is remarkable that, though broken, you were able to resuscitate. And such a superb penultimate verse "Now I stand....celestial sunset". Wishing you the blessings of light.
George Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 3:05 AM
"I was broken—yes— but bold enough to resuscitate, to regale the necromancy of my rebirth, to supplant sorrow with the sacred sizzle of self." Though you were broken once, now you stay a stalwart- a man of versatility. You made a triumphant come back. As ever, I had to refer the dictionary to find the meaning of many of the words used. Your alliteration is so pleasing. An outstanding composition.
Hind Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 6:18 PM
A wonder of a write, Sotto - could feel the spirit of this poem rising...
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 5:19 PM
I appreciate your well-crafted alliterative phrases. I especially liked the last verse...'quixotic quiddity' -- truly brilliant. Appreciate your poetic voice...wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 12:15 PM
WOW!!! What a powerful write you have here. Yes, Broken but bold enough to bounce back. Great line, "Let the world scrutinize my scars," ~ "Good Luck" A winner for me. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.................
Rolland Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 11:38 AM
impressive poetry, new words, great images, and music, one of your best poet, asking for afterlife ? Who knows ? thanks a lot
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