Aurora Borealis

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You dance in your trailing trousseau,
          Barefooted in the dark of night,
             The distant side of the moon,
            Leave speckled stardust looms,
        Weave intricate patterns of 
     Chameleontic uniqueness,
          Hidden behind long curled tendrils.
                  Dance of dark breathless love,
                     Undisturbed by star- or city lights.
                   And I witness, dazzled and
             Deeply in love. My soul follows your
               every pivot and pirouette, your
                      smile awe-inspires my heart.

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March 17, 2017
© Darren White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/17/2017 7:17:00 PM
The dawn of beautiful poetry!
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Darren White
Date: 3/18/2017 1:12:00 AM
That is a wonderful comment :)
Date: 3/17/2017 10:08:00 AM
Your words took flight and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. Emile.
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 1:08:00 PM
Emile, thank you so much for your kind comment :)
Date: 3/17/2017 7:51:00 AM
Darren, the way you dance with Aurora makes me jealous. She illuminates the heavens as you put on a poetic light show! 7 My best to you, chuck
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 8:05:00 AM
Chuck, thank you :) Also for the 7...
Date: 3/17/2017 4:30:00 AM
Wow, I would so want to witness that! If it dances as well as your poetry it must be amazing!
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 4:34:00 AM
It really does dance the way I describe, Budgie. It's simply beautiful :)
Date: 3/17/2017 4:23:00 AM
Darren, Nice poem. A great example of excellent vocabulary usage. It has inspired me to expand my word-hoard. Thank you. BTW: Here is the decipher for "Unwanted Flower" It is about Marijuana, and how hard working Americans loose their jobs (mandatory drug screening) over a legal (some U.S. states) natural plant.
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 4:27:00 AM
Ahhh, thank you! Love that :)
Date: 3/17/2017 3:54:00 AM
- A beautiful picture, Darren ... a light show in beautiful colors ... you will never forget - // Anne-Lise :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 3:59:00 AM
Exactly, Anne-Lise, I miss seeing it... a lot :)
Date: 3/17/2017 2:09:00 AM
Darren. : ) Your words are deft and enticing, leading the reader on. 27 years ago I saw a great Aurora in Quebec City, Quebec, Canada - so fast moving, like the wind was rippling and flapping a giant white sheet overhead, covering half the sky.
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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 2:17:00 AM
So beautiful, isn't it Doug? Only... was it white only? That would be such a shame, because the colours are absolutely smashing!
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