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Aurora and Avalanche

Aurora And Avalanche

                                              Heavenly blue night sky
                                         Studded glittering bright stars   
 
                                  We linger for the illustrious attraction  

                           Shimmering lights arc throughout the nighttime sky  
                                   Water mirrors its colorful, brilliant dance

                                                 We sit and admire   
                                             On our favorite rock bluff  
                                   Surrounded by seductive fluffy white snow 
                                 Sweet moments of kisses and holding hands 
                                              Between two love birds 

                                          At a distance we hear the echo 
                                   Rapid snow flows down a mountain slope

                                           Our dark and white plumage
                                         Shimmers of the brilliant colors
                                            With the shimmering lights
© 3/4/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Eve, congrats on your best poem. Love LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:38 PM
ahhh, two beautiful love birds. This is precious, Eve. BIG Congrats on the win.
Guzzi Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie, Hugs Eve
Delaney Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Congratulations Eve: Somehow I am picturing two birds watching the wonders of Nature together. Nice write. SuZ
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Thank you, Suzanne, Yes, two beautiful Penguins on lovers lane admiring the view.
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Sweet win, Eve... SKAT
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Thank you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Arowolo Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Lovely piece, nice imagery... Congrats on your well deserved win...
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Olusegun. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:15 PM
such vivid imagery Eve I can't believe this one escaped my attention - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Hello Jan thank you for always being there for me and your congratulations. Hugs Eve
Nunez Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:54 AM
I like the imagery here, Eve. A 7. Congratulations! hugs
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:14 PM
Kim, thank you for your kind words the seven the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:47 AM
fascinating write Eve I question if you need the ness on illustrious for me it spoils the flow congrats on placing hugs
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Shadow, thank you so much for placing me in your contest. I love your suggestion I will go back and change it. Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Hi Eve. Back again with congratulations; your lovely imagery served you well. // paul
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, Paul, for always being supportive. Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:46 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Roper Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Thank you, Skate :~) hugs
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
Roper Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Linda, thank you for the congratulations and you're presents I truly enjoy never stop visiting. Blessings and hugs dear friend
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 8:58 PM
Hi Eve, stopping back again to congratulate you on your nice win for your amazing poem which I enjoyed so much reading again. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Sandra, thank you for the congratulations and reading my poem again you're very kind .Your poem was outstanding and very well discribed. Blessings and hugs dear friend
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April 27, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Congrats on your romantic winning work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Love the pic..Sara
Roper Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Thank you, Sara, for the congratulations. You're poem " Riding On Fear And Hope" was wonderful. Blessings and hugs dear friend
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roper Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Debbie, thank you for the congratulations you're very kind. Blessings and hugs dear friend
Sewell Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Lovely imagery, Eve :)
Roper Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Thank you for the compliment. Blessings
Haight Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Such beautiful images you poetically portray for this theme, Eve. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Roper Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Sandra, I love writing this poem of the Penguins. Thank you for the compliment and the best wishes. Blessings dear friend
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March 7, 2015 at 2:16 AM
Beautiful imagery of wintry night, Eve...best wishes in the contest! Hugs, rhonda
Roper Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Rhonda, thank you for enjoying my poem and your wonderful comment
Hamilton Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 3:05 PM
this blows me away Eve it is a stupendous write 7+
Roper Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Shadow, your inspiring words mean a lot to me. Blessings dear friend
La France Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Eve, your poem is beautifully written, a winner in my humble opinion, best of luck, I have been wanting to enter this contest but just could not come up with anything, probably too late now and thanks so much for your kind comment on my poem The Dream Lingers . . .
Roper Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Dear friend, that is why mine is late because I didn't think of anything either but the idea came up yesterday. Inspired by George Seal poem. And no it is not too late. Blessings dear friend
Callus Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 6:17 AM
I love your take on this theme, Eve! your imagery is lovely and enchanting. The love birds have found the ideal place to spend a romantic time together! gl in contest. // paul
Roper Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Paul, your Haiku, was inspiring I love all the dramatic imagery of the of the Aurora & Avalanche. Blessings dear friend
Trifiatis Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 5:18 AM
Symphony of images of beauty superbly depicted, dear Eve!
Roper Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Thank you dear friend, I do love the artwork one can do with Personification.
Smith Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 11:38 PM
A brilliantly painted picture Eve....best wishes for the contest... Hugs Tim
Roper Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Thank you, Tim, for you wonderful compliment. Blessings and hugs dear friend
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