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Written - 4th October 2024

Aunty Gertie

Aunty Gertie may be an ol’ girly But that doesn’t imply she can’t be flirty The gleam in her eyes Comes as a surprise As aunty Gertie is three times thirty. Gertie lives a life full of joy and fun She’s an angel delight to everyone She can do the splits As well as high kicks What’s more is that Gertie can’t be outrun. Gertie dresses alike a beauty queen Her hair it glows in a silvery gleam She makes up her face With dignified grace The prettiest grandma one’s ever seen. Aunty Gertie’s a poet, it’s the truth Good poetry too, though she’s long of tooth She writes through the night In gleam of moonlight Gertie’s a walking, talking dream come true.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 1:17 PM
She sounds like super woman at that age!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 8:29 PM
Thank you Andrea, wouldn’t it be wonderful to be that supplle at that age… Beryl
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 5:02 AM
Gertie sounds my kind o' gal. Nice write, Beryl :)
Edmonds  Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 7:09 PM
Thank you Suzette, the kind of o’ gal that’s good to be around, if ever one like her can be found… Beryl
Beaufort Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Beryl, hope this is all true. She is a miracle we can all strive to be like. We only hope life is as kind to us as it has been to her....of course our choices have something to say about it also. Hey....all's well that ends well. Smiles from here to there!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 7:07 PM
Dear Duke, I wish I could say this was true, that Aunty Gertie existed, sorry to say she’s an object of imagination. Thank you for reading and commenting, always gratefully received… Beryl
Meadows Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 12:46 AM
A funny poem! Enjoyed reading this. Well written!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 7:03 PM
Thank you Daisy, I’m pleased that you enjoyed the read… Beryl
Proxenos Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 12:28 AM
She sounds like a dream my friend and who would not aspire to doing and being who she is today. She sounds full of fun that is why you her niece is charming, talented and writes such refreshing poetry. Love and blessings, Jennifer.
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October 11, 2024 at 7:02 PM
Thank you Jennifer, although Aunty Gertie is a fragment of imagination, a lady like her would be a joy to have around. Blessings and love in return, Beryl
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October 7, 2024 at 10:17 AM
Oh, that all of us had an "Aunt Gertie" to inspire us and remind us of joy, Beryl. This is just delightful and so charming. If this is for a contest best wishes for a win. It's just plain fun. Autumn blessings to you!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Sam, the Limericks are just for plain fun. Autumn’s blessings sent right back… Beryl
Mcintosh Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 6:45 AM
Wonderful writing. God bless you. Much love, Gina
Edmonds  Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Gina. Love in return with blessings… Beryl
Manassian Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 6:29 AM
Good one! Seems like one of those larger than life characters it would be a joy to be around. Thanks for your visit to my page.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 1:42 PM
Thank you for reading Eileen, comments appreciated… Beryl
One Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 10:58 AM
You always have a wonderful flow with your words... Aunt Gertie sounds like a great poet...
Edmonds  Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Thank you Silent One, a great poet who likes to show it… Beryl
M  Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 11:54 PM
I love the sound of Aunt Gertie, Beryl! A free spirit embracing life and having a damn good time haha!! We all need a Gertie in our lives to brighten our days and be a reminder to enjoy it!! Love this fun upbeat poem!! Debx
Edmonds  Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 7:34 PM
Thank you very much Deb, if one’s got it, then show it…… Beryl x
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October 4, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Although a little old in the tooth, Auntie Gertie is living proof , That having fun , Keeps you young , A lady who still raises the roof.
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October 4, 2024 at 1:59 PM
Love your poetic reply brother John, none of us are too old to have fun. If we keep ourselves upbeat, who cares if we have ageing teeth… Sis Beryl
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