Auntie’s Treasured Haunt

My pale skin elbows perch on bridge imposing,
upon some ample urban gurgling river’s surge,
a heart palpitating in nostalgic rhythmic vein,
as I recall my auntie aglow in treasured haunt,
who focussed without minimal falter or delay,
at a remote mist enshrouded mystery  peak,
lady who communed with transcendant  summit, 
with rippled laughter, bouncy sumptuous rapture,
she dreamt of sculpting velvet prose in praise but alas,
a woman’s early passing this sudden thwarted foil,
perhaps  I might fulfill that sapphire cloud aspiration,
oh how I yearn profoundly for such charisma now,
her colourful asides, witty tinted “INK”-lings,
whose temperament exuded pink pastel
brushstrokes,
 petrichor of poignancy that lingering whimsical, spark from my boundless auntie,
a red hue’d stimulus I inherited
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 4:06 PM
Ahh!! so nice of you remembering your aunt in this work. Way to go. Sara K. 👏✍️.
Kerr Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 7:21 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your kind comment. It keeps me going and encourages me. H
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September 24, 2026 at 3:50 AM
Howard, your lovely poem paints a vivid picture of nostalgia and admiration for an aunt who had a significant impact on the yourself. The imagery is rich, utilizing elements like rivers, mountains, and colors to convey the depth of feeling and connection. The use of poetic devices such as alliteration and metaphor enhances the emotional resonance, while the recurring themes of longing and unfulfilled aspirations add layers to the poem. Excellent Job
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