Aunt May

She is arrogant and a tiny bit rude
She comes into the house on a run
Wanting to repair all of us
She is our mother’s sister, the oldest of ten

Aunt May! We yell, loving her in spite of herself
For she also has a side that will do anything for you.
She will babysit, mow, take your paper route, 
Bring you homemade cinnamon rolls dripping with icing.

She is trying to fix mom now. 
Mom had never needed repaired
But she wants to fix her nonetheless.
Mom rolls her eyes; tells us to go play.

But wait she has snatched my sister’s britches off.
She is insisting on a needle and thread so she can repair them.
My sister runs off screaming, angry as all get out.
Her embarrassed boyfriend slides silently out the door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bauer Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 3:38 PM
you sure know how to capture someone in a poem, caren! fantastic!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 4:52 PM
I have captured her for sure!
Raven Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Hi Caren, thank you for posting your poem on your Aunt May. She really sounds like a character. Probably, being the eldest, she thinks of herself as Mother Hen, looking after all her chicks. I really enjoyed this fun read. Love the content. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 4:53 PM
She is the drill sargent everybody needs.
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Lol your aunt May is quite a character, Caren!! Probably deep down she is kind and loving; being the eldest of ten she looks at all her siblings with motherly eyes! ~ Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 4:54 PM
She really is! She treats us all like we are toddlers. She is 91.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Love this...such good fodder for poems! Laughed when Aunt May stole your sister’s britches!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 4:54 PM
I am so glad Kim.
Kashyap Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 8:55 AM
Good one Caren. Liked your Aunt May repairs...
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Thank you Riddhima.
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