Aunt Lucy Was Cross Fit

Lucy's heart silk was spun on the loom of God.
A polio angel breaking free from poverty's claw~ 
Graceful even in that metal-legged chrysalis. 
Sowing rows of hope for the meek and faithless~
Fate taunting her steps with ripples of black ice.
Navigating rutty avenues with a Duchenne smile~
Never a crossword for hordes of non-believers
Despite the maelstrom of takers and deceivers~
She was a glimmer in a mountain topped with grit.
With petrichor soul of a giver, born to be cross-fit ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 5:06 PM
such a unique take on the theme Anthony she sounds like one amazing lady:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Bianco Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Hi Jan, Thanks for reading. She was amazing, through many tragedies I don't think she ever once lost faith. Anthony
Devonshire Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:39 PM
People with disabilities who remain so spiritual and positive truly amaze me, Anthony. Lucy accepted the crosses (or challenges) presented to her with such grace! Really enjoyed your poem. With many outstanding entries, judging was difficult (again). Congratulations on a second-place win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Bianco Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Hi Carolyn, Thanks for sponsoring another contest I think the openness of the theme made it all the more challenging. Best wishes, Anthony
Romios Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 7:09 AM
As usual, Anthony, your poems always do overwhelm me. What a painting this creates! More Aunt Lucys needed in our lives. Panagiota
Bianco Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Hi Panaqiota, thanks for reading, yes and there should be more of her type for sure
Krutsinger Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 6:45 AM
She sounds gritty, faithful, determined, and truly a warrior for God. Nice one!
Bianco Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Hi Caren, thanks for dropping by and having a look at my poems, Lucy was a great person..one in a billion. Anthony
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