August Departure

I could not see anything wrong
With getting a tan in a thong
But it made Jan ruffle
when it failed to muffle
Spicy chili con carne pong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Laurie Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Well Rico … you're leaving the pong well and truly behind you - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Faulkner Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:08 PM
Not wise to wear a thong after a meal like that!
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 7:34 AM
ha ha ha this is hilariarse Rico lol:-) adding this to my faves lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 2:36 PM
Mahalo, Jan! Surprisingly, Webster's College Dictionary does not list, "pong", perhaps in fear that it might be used to describe Trump? Aloha! Rico
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