August

august evening
grandfather whittles
the light away

Published September, 2009, The Heron's Nest

grandfatherlighthaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

May 4, 2015 at 3:19 PM

Hello Thomas, Enjoyable Month, Some might not like. This is a wonderful haiku. By the way my name is LINDA :)

Constance La France

May 4, 2015 at 6:56 AM

Thomas, beautifully written haiku, so visual, 7, congrats on the publication also and I want to thank you so much for my awesome placement in your Days contest, I am very honored