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Auburn

Auburn Stagnated time recalls sweet memories, Your breaths and skin next to mine, Auburn of blazing red fire, Longings reaching crest put to rest ! Written on 25/7/14 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma Contest- The passion of a Jue Ju Sponsor- Nette onclaud

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Date: 7/26/2014 7:20:00 AM
Sweet Upma! You make these difficult forms look so easy!.. Beautiful! Gl in the contest.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/26/2014 5:21:00 AM
this contest is producing some beautiful entries, and this is certainly one of them! it's very evocative, and I like the internal rhyme you've used in the last line - good luck! :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 4:06:00 PM
Sweet and tasteful...Lovely, Dr Upma! Hugs!!
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Date: 7/25/2014 1:47:00 PM
How passionate Upma... Hugs Tim
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Date: 7/25/2014 8:50:00 AM
You've certainly filled this with passion. Nicely done and best of luck with the contest.
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Date: 7/25/2014 8:23:00 AM
Beautifully crafted -love the challenge of this form. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
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