Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Verse

Auburn

Auburn

Stagnated time recalls sweet memories,
Your breaths and skin next to mine,
Auburn of blazing red fire,
Longings reaching crest put to rest !



Written on 25/7/14
By Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Contest- The passion of a Jue Ju
Sponsor- Nette onclaud

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Arlene Smith July 26, 2014 at 7:20 AM Sweet Upma! You make these difficult forms look so easy!.. Beautiful! Gl in the contest.. Hugs.. Arlene

Charlotte Puddifoot July 26, 2014 at 5:21 AM this contest is producing some beautiful entries, and this is certainly one of them! it's very evocative, and I like the internal rhyme you've used in the last line - good luck! :)

Eileen Manassian July 25, 2014 at 4:06 PM Sweet and tasteful...Lovely, Dr Upma! Hugs!!

Tim Smith July 25, 2014 at 1:47 PM How passionate Upma... Hugs Tim

Scott Thirtyseven July 25, 2014 at 8:50 AM You've certainly filled this with passion. Nicely done and best of luck with the contest.

Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 8:23 AM Beautifully crafted -love the challenge of this form. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx