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As the sunrise cast purple upon pines
A Mockingbird chatters to cricket's tune
Not knowing on the insect he'll soon dine
Now his hunger isn't inclined, just hears croon
And his heart to the music is attune
Insects and animals without a soul
Can devour, without thought, another whole
Has society reverted, fallen
to days when Satan in the garden stole
Man's righteousness; left in shame crestfallen  

This came to me this morning as I listened to the news
someone or ones shot a man seventeen times after 
demanding of him his wallet and car keys which he 
gave to them but the man lived with seventeen 
gunshot wounds..What is wrong with our society??

Written: Tuesday, September 06, 2016
Inspired by Laura Loo's contest Dizain Poem II and the above news.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 9/11/2016 12:24:00 PM
This is exceptional, Sarah, I love the way you expressed your feelings so well, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2016 12:25:00 PM
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Date: 9/11/2016 10:48:00 AM
I wish I had an answer to your question ...I'd not heard the story on the news Sara I am so pleased you were inspired to write such a superb poem:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2016 9:38:00 AM
Sweet Sara, you are so right. what is wrong with our society anyways? I didn't hear this story but your poem hit a nerve about how difficult this world can be, especially lately. Very well written and I really enjoyed it...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/6/2016 9:31:00 AM
"There is pleasure in the pathless woods, there is rapture in the lonely shore, there is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar; I love not Man the less, but Nature more." Lord Byron Great write Mrs Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2016 3:34:00 PM
Daniel, I have read some of Lord Byron's works but don't remember this one but I like it..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent here..Sara
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