Attraction

Flitting
from blade to blade,
is that a leaf I see-
no,no a butterfly,happy
and free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 11:43 PM
Awesome!
Bird Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 7:27 PM
Beautiful the butterflies are just like this verse of poetic lovliness.
Keogh Jr. Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 12:22 AM
Nice surprise at the end. reminds me of Kilmer or Frost. I always enjoy entering your contests. Keep 'em coming, my man. Regards,Gerard.
O'Leary Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 7:29 PM
I agree that is has a child-like quality. I like it! Good job! Thanks for sharing!
Gorelick Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 4:17 PM
This is special..I can see it in a book for children. BG
Peranteau Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:25 PM
Brian,...this is just wonderful,...your poetry here makes Jehovah's gifts to us all even so much more beautiful,...His awesome gift to us ,...poetry, and you for stiking that pen on this slip with such creativeness !! james Going in my Favs Sir !!
Babcock Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 8:55 AM
Funny I started out doing a poem on a butterfly this morning and I was at a loss for words. You did it with so few words. Wonderful. God Bless Phyl
Richards Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 7:23 AM
Another day brightener!! Loved this one too!!!
Moreno Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 12:56 AM
I love to watch butterflies sit on blades of grass flapping their wings...Raul
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