Attitude

her attitude is as Stoney as the Henge ~ she’s hellbent on revenge like an old cow chewing cud and grazing ~ her utters are a hazing

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2023 4:10:00 AM

love this, especially the Stone Henge comparison, LOL

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/3/2023 5:47:00 AM

Though I don't know her Lin, I will say that I'm glad that I do not!! Love the 'Stoney as the Henge" line, brilliant ! Happy Sunday xxoo

John Lawless

Date: 8/31/2023 2:20:00 PM

It seems it's always one thing or the udder

Lin Lane
Date: 9/1/2023 7:44:00 AM

True and it’s underlying ridiculous!

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/30/2023 2:49:00 PM

This is brilliant Lin, my favourite form and all, you certainly nailed that old chewing the cud cow good, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2023 7:40:00 PM

This was for you and everyone else she tries to rule.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2023 1:39:00 PM

so well said Lin, I am uddlerly shocked at the behaviour of some here:-( hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2023 7:34:00 PM

Yep, Jan. Some want to be top doggies and like hearing themselves bark.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/30/2023 11:47:00 AM

This one's clever. I'll never catch up to reading everything you've written Lin; so I thought I'd start at the end and work my way back to the beginning ; )~

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2023 7:33:00 PM

Hey Jeff. You don’t have to catch up but I appreciate you wanting to read so much from me.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2023 11:18:00 AM

- Powerful, Lin ... Reacting with a desire for revenge is completely natural, and can be a defense mechanism :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2023 7:31:00 PM

It should be said by many. Thank you, Ana-Lise.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/30/2023 10:51:00 AM

I enjoyed this. As a kid I was told, chewing gum was like a cow chewing cud. Just a thought on that one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2023 7:31:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Paula.